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根据TPO小站放出的独立写作鸡精会依次列提纲
稍难题会贴出范文
范文(不考虑综合写作)至少会有20分吧(完全不够阿喂
有些题目会想不粗来
然后你们随便看看就好了
吐槽随意
厂长提供吐血批改作文(虽然质量无法保证
好~麻~烦~阿~不~想~动~诶~
总之向着28+进发吧(笑)


1楼2014-08-05 13:12回复
    目前参照8.16鸡精


    2楼2014-08-05 13:14
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      1 120520 CN
      People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.


      本楼含有高级字体3楼2014-08-05 13:14
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        AGREE.
        1.PR 可以提高自身知名度出名了就有钱了
        2.PR 增加了升职&录取机会
        3.PR扩大social network 交到更多朋友


        4楼2014-08-05 13:19
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          Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make our life simply actually makes our life more complicated.


          本楼含有高级字体5楼2014-08-05 13:21
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            DISAGREE.
            1.Tech-transportation-plane-save time&easy to travel to other places
            2.robot-do chores-convenient
            -calculate&save&search data&information-improve work efficiency
            3.eaucational eqquipment-better-pormote edu quality


            6楼2014-08-05 13:26
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              Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today.


              本楼含有高级字体7楼2014-08-05 13:27
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                AGREE.
                1.以前环境比现在好 现在环境(eg.水污染)不好 种出来的东西有害成分很多
                2.现在化学添加剂&农药用量增多 几乎各类食品都有防腐剂成分 eg.瘦肉精[Clenbuterol, a banned drug that causes pigs to shed fat]
                3.想!不!粗!来!
                DISAGREE.
                1.现在的人们对食品安全问题越来越关注 意识有所加强
                2.食品安全部门管理比以前严格 政府制定更完善的政策整治
                3.新闻媒体报道力度加强 不法添加行为一经发现就大肆报道 引起人们警觉 黑心商贩不敢再犯


                8楼2014-08-05 13:36
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                  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should support artists rather than allow them to support themselves.


                  本楼含有高级字体9楼2014-08-05 13:37
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                    AGREE.
                    1.Artists没有稳定的经济收入 需要政府支持
                    2.艺术是文化产业的重要部分 政府要支持文化产业振兴国家
                    3.Artwork可以吸引游客 发展旅游业 增加收入


                    10楼2014-08-05 13:41
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                      5 111211 CN
                      Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country.


                      本楼含有高级字体11楼2014-08-05 13:41
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                        DISAGREE.
                        因为题干含有most 所以列出school以外的因素即可
                        1.经济
                        2.科技
                        3.环境
                        4.文化


                        12楼2014-08-05 13:44
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                            16楼2014-08-06 12:20
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                              6 120108 CN
                              Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problemsby themselves or with the help from their family members, so there is no need for thegovernment to help them.


                              17楼2014-08-06 12:21
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