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根据TPO小站放出的独立写作鸡精会依次列提纲
稍难题会贴出范文
范文(不考虑综合写作)至少会有20分吧(完全不够阿喂
有些题目会想不粗来
然后你们随便看看就好了
吐槽随意
厂长提供吐血批改作文(虽然质量无法保证
好~麻~烦~阿~不~想~动~诶~
总之向着28+进发吧(笑)


1楼2014-08-05 13:12回复
    目前参照8.16鸡精


    2楼2014-08-05 13:14
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      1 120520 CN
      People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.


      本楼含有高级字体3楼2014-08-05 13:14
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        AGREE.
        1.PR 可以提高自身知名度出名了就有钱了
        2.PR 增加了升职&录取机会
        3.PR扩大social network 交到更多朋友


        4楼2014-08-05 13:19
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          2 100926 CN
          Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make our life simply actually makes our life more complicated.


          本楼含有高级字体5楼2014-08-05 13:21
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            DISAGREE.
            1.Tech-transportation-plane-save time&easy to travel to other places
            2.robot-do chores-convenient
            -calculate&save&search data&information-improve work efficiency
            3.eaucational eqquipment-better-pormote edu quality


            6楼2014-08-05 13:26
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              3 110108 CN
              Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today.


              本楼含有高级字体7楼2014-08-05 13:27
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                AGREE.
                1.以前环境比现在好 现在环境(eg.水污染)不好 种出来的东西有害成分很多
                2.现在化学添加剂&农药用量增多 几乎各类食品都有防腐剂成分 eg.瘦肉精[Clenbuterol, a banned drug that causes pigs to shed fat]
                3.想!不!粗!来!
                DISAGREE.
                1.现在的人们对食品安全问题越来越关注 意识有所加强
                2.食品安全部门管理比以前严格 政府制定更完善的政策整治
                3.新闻媒体报道力度加强 不法添加行为一经发现就大肆报道 引起人们警觉 黑心商贩不敢再犯


                8楼2014-08-05 13:36
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                  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should support artists rather than allow them to support themselves.


                  本楼含有高级字体9楼2014-08-05 13:37
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                    AGREE.
                    1.Artists没有稳定的经济收入 需要政府支持
                    2.艺术是文化产业的重要部分 政府要支持文化产业振兴国家
                    3.Artwork可以吸引游客 发展旅游业 增加收入


                    10楼2014-08-05 13:41
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                      5 111211 CN
                      Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country.


                      本楼含有高级字体11楼2014-08-05 13:41
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                        DISAGREE.
                        因为题干含有most 所以列出school以外的因素即可
                        1.经济
                        2.科技
                        3.环境
                        4.文化


                        12楼2014-08-05 13:44
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                          13楼2014-08-05 13:45
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                            什么鸟东西


                            来自iPhone客户端14楼2014-08-05 14:51
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                              厂长牛逼!


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