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写剧本,鸭梨啊。。。。。

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1楼2011-11-30 13:28回复
    初稿,未完,不过我不知道怎么编啦


    3楼2011-11-30 14:39
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      是有的。。你看出哪儿有语病啦?指点指点


      5楼2011-11-30 15:41
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        (she check her hand and smile)Raj, can you
        show it to us?
        (Raj shaking his hand and head)
        H:Penny, don’t push him ,you know he can
        speak when you are here.
        P:No, you’re wrong , not only me. So ,It’s
        your turn.
        L:Good for you~(Penny stretching her tongue)
        S:Haward, I guess we quitted on you.
        H:Bodacious, in situation of this ….I stand
        at the ready
        P:Here you are.
        H:First ,we fold it ,look ,it likes a
        broken toy, and maybe I should add this ”choose the color you favor ”,I don’t
        like white flowers at all.
        S:Muggle…
        L:Scheldon~
        H:Ok,and then make the shape like a flower,
        all right.
        P:That’s all?
        H:Yep.
        S:Ladies and gentlemen, I think it’s time
        for a real hero to exile his talent. Don’t think too much, it’s Scheldon Cooper….
        L:Here we go~
        H:Ling….Time’s over.
        P:Ok, thanks guys, here’s homework :
        everyone make ten Penny Flowers .
        S:Wait,hear me out.
        (They left out)
        P:You’re all bad bug.
        L:More or less.


        6楼2011-11-30 15:54
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          ole


          7楼2011-11-30 15:54
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