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写剧本,鸭梨啊。。。。。

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1楼2011-11-30 13:28回复
    初稿,未完,不过我不知道怎么编啦


    3楼2011-11-30 14:39
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      好像有个什么程序可以检测语病···


      4楼2011-11-30 14:43
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        是有的。。你看出哪儿有语病啦?指点指点


        5楼2011-11-30 15:41
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          (she check her hand and smile)Raj, can you
          show it to us?
          (Raj shaking his hand and head)
          H:Penny, don’t push him ,you know he can
          speak when you are here.
          P:No, you’re wrong , not only me. So ,It’s
          your turn.
          L:Good for you~(Penny stretching her tongue)
          S:Haward, I guess we quitted on you.
          H:Bodacious, in situation of this ….I stand
          at the ready
          P:Here you are.
          H:First ,we fold it ,look ,it likes a
          broken toy, and maybe I should add this ”choose the color you favor ”,I don’t
          like white flowers at all.
          S:Muggle…
          L:Scheldon~
          H:Ok,and then make the shape like a flower,
          all right.
          P:That’s all?
          H:Yep.
          S:Ladies and gentlemen, I think it’s time
          for a real hero to exile his talent. Don’t think too much, it’s Scheldon Cooper….
          L:Here we go~
          H:Ling….Time’s over.
          P:Ok, thanks guys, here’s homework :
          everyone make ten Penny Flowers .
          S:Wait,hear me out.
          (They left out)
          P:You’re all bad bug.
          L:More or less.


          6楼2011-11-30 15:54
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            ole


            7楼2011-11-30 15:54
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