美若黎明
.
趁着你还没醒来
我已悄悄地离开
迎着第一缕风
穿过最后的雾霭
.
黎明还没升起来
心里已经有期待
虽然还有伤痛
早已习惯了忍耐
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
远处渐渐升起不一样的朝阳
.
回望曾经的旅程
三言两语说不清
过去的已过去
今天已经到来
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
望着我说出了那句动听的语言
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰

Fair as the Dawn
.
While you're still deep in dreams,
Quietly I slip away
To welcome the morning breeze
As the last mist fades
.
I look east for the Dawn,
with a heart in hope stirring
The old wounds may still ache,
But I've grown used to enduring
.
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasy-land
Far off in the distance sees a new sunrise
.
Looking back to whence we've come
Leaves me at a loss for words
But let the bygones go by--
This new day has arrived
.
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
Behold the world looks so young and lovely
.
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasyland
She begins to say those fairest words, gazing deep into my eyes
.
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
Behold the world looks so young and lovely

我……不知道说什么才能减轻我的内疚感。本来我就不擅长中->英翻译，写了两年程序，人类语言能力更捉急了。这词的意思我差不多能保留，可是意境基本是给糟蹋了……可惜了一首好词，唉，可是我确实尽力了

哎，建议做一个一行英文一行中文版本的……好两个一起看 中译英，还是一首诗（黑月亮脸）美钻已经上升到一个境界了w

美若黎明
Fair as the Dawn
.
趁着你还没醒来
While you're still deep in dreams
我已悄悄地离开
Quietly I slip away
迎着第一缕风
To welcome the morning breeze
穿过最后的雾霭
As the last mist fades
.
黎明还没升起来
I look east for the Dawn,
心里已经有期待
with a heart in hope stirring
虽然还有伤痛
The old wounds may still ache,
早已习惯了忍耐
But I've grown used to enduring
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasy-land
远处渐渐升起不一样的朝阳
Far off in the distance sees a new sunrise
.
回望曾经的旅程
Looking back to whence we've come
三言两语说不清
Leaves me at a loss for words
过去的已过去
But let the bygones go by
今天已经到来
This new day has arrived
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰
Behold the world looks so young and lovely
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasyland
望着我说出了那句动听的语言
She begins to say those fairest words, gazing deep into my eyes
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰
Behold the world looks so young and lovely

那我就发点……? 迎着第一缕风=the first breeze如何？跟下文的last mist对应？ Far off in the distance sees a new sun rise 主语是前文的I还是distance啊hhhhh 因为动词是sees。 歌声里的你会和我永远在一起，我咋觉得意思是他俩没在一起。。 love endures like you and me 的话就是you and me其实endure就是在一起了…… 望着我说出了那句动听的语言，既然前文有dreamer了这一句是不是可以直接接着用spoke和gazed？年轻的世界如此清晰用了lovely是为了押韵吗hhhh 最后（捂脸） 重要的事情说三遍，中译英好难，中译英好难，中译英好难！美钻你。。。我膜拜！！

@工二一 我觉得first在意思上更贴近，但是两个音节的morning读着更顺口。有没什么first的近义词是两个音节的啊……
"远处渐渐升起不一样的朝阳” 那句英文确实不通，昨天晚上我想了几个版本：
Far off in the distance, a new sun comes to life （这个其实是抄的celtic woman：far off in the distance，a fire comes to life）
Far off in the distance, a new sun arises (这个不太押韵）
Spoke 和 gaze 理论上可以直接用，但是怎么样才能把它组织成一句通顺的话呀（
lovely是纯为了押韵，一点事实基础都没有23333
然后我又改了第二小节的一句，虽然还有伤痛，从though old wounds may still ache 变成了 though sorrows may linger still。。。

美若黎明
Fair as the Dawn
.
趁着你还没醒来
While you're still deep in dreams
我已悄悄地离开
Quietly I slip away
迎着第一缕风
To welcome the morning breeze
穿过最后的雾霭
As the last mist fades
.
黎明还没升起来
I look east for the Dawn,
心里已经有期待
With a heart in hope stirring
虽然还有伤痛
Though sorrows linger still
早已习惯了忍耐
I've grown used to enduring
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasy-land
远处渐渐升起不一样的朝阳
Far off in the distance, a new sun comes to life
.
回望曾经的旅程
Looking back to whence we've come
三言两语说不清
Leaves me at a loss for words
过去的已过去
Let the bygones go by
今天已经到来
This new day has arrived!
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰
The world before my eyes stands so young and pristinely
.
我听见那天堂鸟已开始了歌唱
Oh, I hear the blissful songs of birds-of-paradise
跑过来又跑过去的风还在游荡
A wind roaming playfully, ever free and blithe
我看见那梦中人走出彩色的房间
Oh, I see the Dreamer rose and left the fantasyland
望着我说出了那句动听的语言
She said to me those fairest words, gazing deep into my eyes
.
我听见了人们说起亲切的话题
Oh, I hear the people talk with warmth and empathy
歌声里的你和我会永远在一起
In their songs, Love endures like you and I will be
我看见了陌生人渐渐熟悉了起来
Oh, I see a friendship bonding strangers far and near
年轻的世界从未有过的清晰
The world before my eyes stands so young and pristinely