明天复习日语单词，补一个英语和日语的听力进度，按照原来的计划，作文已经开始交给专门老师批改了，之后可能会考虑在贴吧记录每次获得的成绩，雅思备考渐渐进入良性循环了

10.18作文
作文题目：
In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think that university graduates who become new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
作文正文：
Nowadays many people think that to reduce the gap of infrastructures in rural areas and cities, universities students should work in rural areas for a few years. I completely agree with this idea.
With the development of economic economy in a rapid speed , cities attract most of universities graduates because of higher salaries and better career prospects , which cause an increasing gap of education and medical facilities between cities and rural areas. People from small towns and rural areas are likely to relocate to big cities for well-developed material conditions , which result in an uneven population distribution . Finally , the shortage of labor and low level of education would hinder the economic development in these areas.
For these reasons above , in my opinion, more university graduates working in rural areas can ease the stress of development . They can use their knowledge and professional skills to help increase the level of education and material conditions. For example , they can put the information of some handicrafts made by rural-origin people on the Internet and help them to make money by selling them. They can also teach children about some practical skills and help them go to better schools and receive better education.
On the other hand , working in rural areas can help those graduates to have the sense of perseverance, dedication and other virtues, which will be of great importance to their career path in the future.
In conclusion , working in rural areas for a few years can not only benefit to the economic development and educational improvement, but also be meaningful to individual's development.

昨天的作文评分项 解释 评 分
Task Achievement任务完成情况 Covers all requirements of the task满足题目所有要求 6.5
Coherence and Cohesion连贯性和衔接性 Sequencing of information and ideas logically, sufficient and appropriate paragraphing. 信息和内容组织符合逻辑，分段足够且恰当 6.5
Lexical Resource词汇多样性 Correct word choice and a lot of uncommon words.选词正确，能使用不常见词汇 6.5
Grammar语法 Command of the elements of Standard Written English, including grammar, and sentence structure. 能运用标准的书面英语，包括语法及句式结构 7
综合分数：6.5
因为是雅思机构的评分，所以我还是每次分数减去0.5，不错，再练习一个月看看能不能冲7

明天早上复习全部整理词汇和作文纲要，下午做点听力作文然后搞专业课，晚上口语加日语，有空的话看看小作文

总结现在作文的两个问题：
1 单纯罗列观点，连贯性不强
2 语法单一，缺少亮点
至于高大上的词汇词组啥的那个得慢慢积累，急不得

天天赶不完的进度，天天学不完的英语，卧槽赶紧这个月把口语话题过了下个月要上新书了

给作文训练弄了一个详细的安排，过几天发到贴吧里吧，口语按照原来的进度12月要开始模拟训练了，不过时间应该还算足够，按照现在的进度，作文和口语有信心搞定了，看看听力啥时候突破

作文题目：
Some people think that intelligent students should be educated together with other students. Others, however, think that they should be educated separately. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
作文正文：
Nowadays, many students are separated according to their IQ levels and then some students thought have talents in their study will go to gifted program in order to get better education.
Many people agree with this way of education because intelligent students can make higher goals and be more likely to reach their academic potential in such a challenging environment surrounded by peers with high intelligence. This style of instruction will also increase the efficiency of education by recruiting competent teachers in high-level classes, students can be taught much extra-curriculum knowledge with little repetition, which would broaden their horizons and enrich their knowledge, too.
Many educationalists, however, hold the view that separating students into different classes would have many negative effects on other ordinary students in their academic and mental development. Without role models, most of students would be inattentive during their process of learning. The thought that they perform worse than some of their peers may also increase their peer pressure and academic stress, which even damage their self-confidence and self-esteem. Finally these psychological problems would hinder their development in study and career path in the future.
From my point of view, the school needs to have more challenging elective courses for those students with high IQ levels, but all of the students should attend compulsory courses together because through this every student can interact and communicate with each other together no matter he or she is intelligent or not.
In conclusion, even if educating students by separating them may be efficient to some extent, the equality of education itself should not be neglected.

昨天改的作文又是个6.5，卧槽难道上不了7吗，醉了~周末再练一篇

汇报一下第一笔雅思经费：1000人民币
购买了30次大作文批改业务和6次小作文批改业务
算上之前购买雅思书籍花了近500元已经花了1500了（我日语花了多少钱了？一个电子辞典2000+1000书才3000）
这次的预算还有口语的1000，雅思报名费1700，算上路费的话我去近5000啊一架高级航模就这么没了唉，学习还真不便宜，比我学费还贵

30次大作文进度是一直安排到12月末的，口语在12月也要开始模拟练习与考试了，这个月结束前尽量把听力的安排搞定，周五连带周末的任务一起安排了：
1 大作文一篇
2 听力练习结束一份
3 总结作文词汇词组和背诵
4 4份日语听力
5 日语单词背诵
6 之前总结的一本知识点过一遍
7 口语练习

咋就置顶了啊，(⊙o⊙)感觉好丢人的样子

曾经大一转去其他院系的同学休学搞实习去了，怎么说呢，大学不得志？可是明明去了学校最好的班级受到了最好的教育，再不得志总得总结下自己的原因吧。大一的时候我记得军训我脚肿了在宿舍休息，他那天肚子痛回宿舍，我记得那是开学第二周吧，虽然不是很熟起码还是扯淡扯上了，他说高考没发挥好来了这，然后啊就是有各种理想愿望啥的，以后想当个飞行器还是机械工程师不太记得了。（他很喜欢飞行器方面的东西，也问我买过几架航模）
之后呢，为了离开我们这个几乎垫底他也不感兴趣的专业，考进了陈庚班（全校最好的班级），本应大展宏图，现在却是求学道路上各种失利，也许他之前没必要离开吧，现在也只能想想了，每个人都会面临选择，选了就走下去，没有最好的选择只有自己想做出的决定。
10月份快结束了，不久台湾这里会有期中考试，然后呢半学期就没了，雅思的进度还得继续，日语的学习也不能落下，专业课也要齐头并进，当半年交换时期结束后，给大家展示一个“精英”的“海归”形象吧，晚安，奋斗者们

明天任务：
1 口语照常
2 作文词组整理总结
3 复习之前总结的词汇
4 听力一个练习
5 日语听力补尾