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楼主什么时候写第二部!


来自Android客户端295楼2015-01-23 12:48
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    说实话,我是伪腐,结果楼主的文把我弄成了真腐,(右手拿刀,左手抓住楼主的衣领)说,你要怎么赔我!ps:更新求@


    IP属地:贵州来自Android客户端296楼2015-01-25 08:01
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      求艾特第二部


      来自Android客户端297楼2015-02-04 20:06
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        求txt版本。


        来自Android客户端298楼2015-02-10 20:48
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          说实话 写银魂同人的不少 文笔能看的实在少 威银更是少之又少...在为数不多的同人里看到楼主的文 简直 曙光啊!!!!
          怎么说 很喜欢楼主文里的哥哥(口水)有点太可爱了 不妙不妙 因为楼主写的哥哥太可爱了结果更喜欢他了啦!!!
          不仅是文风故事架构发展看着都很...舒服(等等
          不会文评 总之楼主请继续加油TUUUUUUT!!!!!


          IP属地:中国香港来自手机贴吧299楼2015-03-01 22:36
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            今天搞定好文档了,有想要的可以来这个下载点:
            http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6ytdpw
            文章的部分桥段和细节有做过修改,但主干剧情不变
            所以只是单纯要看新东西的话,不用特地下载来看~真的很好奇,可以去ALL银吧那边,我都贴过去了。
            第一次用百度上传,如果无法下载,请告诉我一声~


            300楼2015-03-08 16:03
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              突然发现发这个可以加好多经验~ 赞
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              来自Android客户端301楼2015-03-15 08:32
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                完结撒花


                来自Android客户端302楼2015-03-22 10:24
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                  看完了,来点个赞~~\(≥▽≤)/~


                  303楼2015-04-30 22:54
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                    看完了,给个赞
                    哥哥的个性也写得超像\(≥▽≤)/


                    304楼2015-05-05 14:51
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                      么么哒


                      来自iPad305楼2015-10-10 22:09
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                        楼主还有吗


                        来自iPad306楼2015-10-10 22:27
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                          嘎嘎嘎


                          来自iPad307楼2015-10-10 22:29
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                            楼楼俺爱你❤️


                            来自iPad308楼2015-10-10 22:40
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                              楼主万岁


                              来自iPad309楼2015-10-10 22:46
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