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要求写一篇关于将来工作的文章
If you ask me what the pursuit of me is.I think I want to be a work of chemistry analysis. There are three reasons about that.
Firstly, I learned the chemistry in the university and I got good scores. Secondly, analytical chemistry is a good subject.As a chemistry analyst,in my opinion ,I could try my best to do it .The last but not least,with the development of the society ,chemistry analysers are more and more important .the environment protection ,the medicine and so.In a word,the analyse chemistry is important career for the society.
Obviously,I could do it well.In order to come true my dream in the future.I need to study hard.
本人英语 很差。。。。。


IP属地:山东1楼2011-05-12 12:14回复
    别沉啊等大神


    IP属地:山东3楼2011-05-12 13:27
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      Thanks!


      IP属地:山东6楼2011-05-13 20:45
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