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要求写一篇关于将来工作的文章
If you ask me what the pursuit of me is.I think I want to be a work of chemistry analysis. There are three reasons about that.
Firstly, I learned the chemistry in the university and I got good scores. Secondly, analytical chemistry is a good subject.As a chemistry analyst,in my opinion ,I could try my best to do it .The last but not least,with the development of the society ,chemistry analysers are more and more important .the environment protection ,the medicine and so.In a word,the analyse chemistry is important career for the society.
Obviously,I could do it well.In order to come true my dream in the future.I need to study hard.
本人英语 很差。。。。。


IP属地:山东1楼2011-05-12 12:14回复
    来看看,无能为力,呵呵,我是初学者,好奇路过


    IP属地:河北2楼2011-05-12 12:41
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      别沉啊等大神


      IP属地:山东3楼2011-05-12 13:27
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        我是ABC。住在美国。帮你一下
        In the future, I would like to work in the field of chemistry analysis. I would like to pursue this career because I have already proven my proficiency in chemistry in University where I have received outstanding grades. I also believe that chemistry plays a monumental role in the development of important facets of modern society such as environmental protection, medicine, and engineering. I know that my work in chemistry analysis will help to further advance these areas of human knowledge, and will improve society. This knowledge gives me a great incentive to do my best in my work. I will study hard in order to achieve my goal of becoming a great chemical analyst.


        4楼2011-05-12 13:55
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          In the future, I would like to work in the field of chemistry analysis. I would like to pursue this career because I have already proven my proficiency in chemistry at University where I have received outstanding grades. I also believe that chemistry plays a monumental role in the development of important facets of modern society such as environmental protection, medicine, and engineering. I know that my work in chemistry analysis will help to further advance these areas of human knowledge, and will therefore contribute to society. This knowledge gives me a great incentive to do my best in my work in the present and the future. I will study hard in order to achieve my goal of becoming a great chemical analyst.
          好一点


          5楼2011-05-12 14:15
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            Thanks!


            IP属地:山东6楼2011-05-13 20:45
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