原句:
Learning English is a thing that make me enjoy funny.
英语学习是一件让我感到愉快的事情
句子需要修正:
修正后的句子：Learning English is a thing that makes me enjoy it.或者
Learning English is a thing that makes me have fun.

原句:Although the weather is not well, Acquire new skills can make me happy
虽然天气不好，但获得新技能可以让我快乐
修改后，Although the weather is bad, acquiring new skills can make me happy.
Even though the weather isn’t ideal, learning new skills brings me joy.

第二天的句子:原因分析:这是一个让步状语从句，主句主语结构错误，原句中的主句部分 "Acquire new skills can make me happy" 存在主谓结构问题。
动词原形 "Acquire" 不能直接作主语，需改为 动名词形式（动词-ing） 或 名词短语。
应该修改为："Acquiring new skills can make me happy"（动名词作主语）
2.搭配不当
"the weather is not well" 中的 "well" 通常用于形容人的健康状态（如：I am well），描述天气时更常用 "good/bad"。
修改后："the weather is not good"。

人工智能最近发展的挺快，新知识应该也能学习到更多吧利用上科技的东西，提高效率

原句:Technology promotes the society development greatly.
技术极大地促进了社会的发展。
发现写的句子还是有问题，动词短语搭配不当。正确的表达方式应为 "promote the development of society"（促进社会的发展），而非 "promote the society development"。
修改为:Technology greatly promotes the development of society."

原句:As a matter of fact,the young should be diligently.
语法错误：副词误用
"diligently"是副词，而系动词"be"后应接形容词作表语，正确形式应为形容词"diligent"。
改进后的句子（修正语法）：
"As a matter of fact, the young should be diligent."

知识和能力对一个公司的生存至关重要
knowledge and ability are crucial for a company's survival.

下雨天可以不用上体育课
It is rainy day that can not have physical exercise classes.

如果我现在不努力学习，将来就很难找工作
原句:If I don't hard learing now，it will difficult to find jobs in the future.