居然一次就成功了度受没吞啊

忘了把完整的歌词贴出来~
Pain - Three Days Grace
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like it rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
you're sick of feeling numb
You're not the only one
I'll take you by the hand
And I'll show you a world that you can understand
This life is filled with hurt
When happiness doesn't work
Trust me and take my hand
When the lights go out you will understand
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Anger and agony
Are better than misery
Trust me I've got a plan
When the lights go off you will understand
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like it rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing
Rather feel pain
I know (I know I know I know I know)
That you're wounded
You know (You know you know you know)
That I'm here to save you
You know (You know you know you know you know)
I'm always here for you
I know (I know I know I know)
That you'll thank me later
Pain, without love
Pain, can't get enough
Pain, I like rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like it rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Pain, without love
Pain, I can't get enough
Pain, I like it rough
'Cause I'd rather feel pain than nothing at all
Rather feel pain than nothing at all
Rather feel pain than nothing at all
Rather feel pain 

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不够乱吗...(看
当然会不知道在说什麼了...因为我也不知道要说什麼= ="
在完全不知要写什麼只是想到什麼写什麼完全没planning没有前言不搭后语是好好的了^^"

好耶！我来接Quinny所说的来解释一下吧...看来光并不明白意识流真正的意义。
(戴上眼镜，拿起粉笔...背景：班房)
意识流是...(= =")...(- 0 -)...(>0<zzz)
(请上维/基自己看。)
总括来说就是乱的意思。适用於描写精神不佳或混乱时用。
於是我们不如分段赏析一下光的作品。
红光, 蓝光, 黄光… 白光。
一个, 两个, 三个… 像蛇一样舞动着的人。
(头两句可好。)
重重的鼓声, 嘈杂的贝斯声, 歌手沙哑的歌声。
混乱的人, 混乱的声音, 混乱的环境…
(精神混乱的人大概不会把接收到的直接过滤为混乱吧。如果要让人处身於中，就要把角色接收到的直接写出来，偶尔插入角色感受骂出来，才有效果啊~)
这光影迷离的世界,到底是最接近天堂的地狱,还是最接近地狱的天堂? 这儿没有人, 没有生命, 有的, 只是一副副躯壳, 只是一副副行尸走肉的活死人。
(同样地，精神不佳的人不会思索人生道理，只会激动地把所有情感「弹」出来，通常是咒骂吧...)
白光, 白发, 白袍, 白皮肤,白翅膀。 你是来带我走我吧? 天堂? 地狱? 不要紧我哪儿也跟你走…
我相信你, 只会相信你。 亲爱的天使大人, 我可以毫无怨言地接受你的所有劳役, 我可以做所有的事情来证明我的信仰… 亲爱的天使大人, 求你请带我走…
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.
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褪色的世界… 天使大人…
地狱? 天堂? 白光… 天使大人? 天使大人!!! 天使大人!!!!
纯白, 坠入黑暗, 从此消失, 不复存在。
(你以上的都围绕着天堂地狱etc，可精神不佳的可不会这麼专心地看着天使大人= =虽然你中间有插入歌词，可那只是背景音乐吧= =完全不是角色的脑海...)
总括而言，这是你对文章的意识流，不是那角色的意识流，可见你未能好好代入角色啊~
但以第一次来说都不错了啊~^^

呃这首歌不错呀..加拿大的Three Days Grace^^
嘛嘛描写人物意识流时，写的人自己未必也一定同时在意识流吧?