可现实依然存在
                                                                                                                                           不要悲伤，不要哭泣
                                                                                                                                                 因为那样也于事无补
                                                                                                                                        只有坚强


                                                                                                                                                       只有坚强才能逃脱
                                                                                                                     逃脱那灾难的魔掌
                                                                                                                                               不抛弃，不放弃
                                                                                                                             虽然，它只是很普通的一句话


                                                                                                                         可它却是我们坚持的理由
                                                                                                                                  因为我们坚信
                                                                                                                                 坚信我们的梦想就在不远处
                                                                                                                                              也许我们很渺小


                                                                                                                                         但同时我们也是强大的
                                                                                                                                                    我们要以生命的名义
                                                                                                                                           向灾难呼喊
                                                                                                                                                    你是压不倒我的
                                                                                                                                                      因为我才是一切的主宰
                          大家多多发言，多提意见，我也好修改，多注意

不抛弃，不放弃

地震、地震、跨塌了
     一次次抢夺我的兄弟姐妹
     67位我的兄弟姐妹他们正赶往天堂
     还有一些压在泥里我知道兄弟们需要氧气
     需要一些温暖还需要一些干粮
     这些我想得到无能为力
    
     7·1级的地震警醒的是什么
     大树倒了春天也走了
     梅花要等到冬天沾染落红的阳光
     也遮遮掩掩的。而我也开始哭泣
     请带我走吧上帝。让我圣洁的死去
     让浊水绕道，让丑陋贴近水源
     让光与影的净化
     让一百个我带走他们
    
     玉树啊！玉树啊！
     你倒下了。屋子里的阳光潺潺
     河里的鱼虾找不到归宿
     怅阂的我和你。天哭了吗？
     地哭了吗？我知道躺在泥里的兄弟一定害怕
     一定等着，等着阳光的穿梭


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