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LS,对小灵的文有什么建议可以大胆地提出来,现在因为她的学习忙,所以她的死党——我,就来帮她代理。
希望大家多提建议,我会在学校转达给小灵的


276楼2008-12-22 17:23
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    DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

    小灵,水晶会多多帮你顶的哦

    我一上线就帮你顶!!


    IP属地:福建277楼2008-12-22 19:06
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      回276L,如果你真要我说出意见那我就说了,我认为小灵的文笔不错,只是剧情稍微有些老套,借鉴的地方有点多,如果能别出心裁就更好了!但要不要采纳我的意见就随你们了!
       ——


      278楼2008-12-22 21:11
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        这样啊~问题有点严重~在学校转达吧
        我这辛苦的传信人啊…


        279楼2008-12-23 07:12
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          还是还顶顶文文啊~DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD


          280楼2008-12-23 18:49
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            小灵,水晶又来帮你顶文咯

            DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD


            IP属地:福建281楼2008-12-23 19:45
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              再来DD


              282楼2008-12-24 06:58
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                ddd


                283楼2008-12-24 12:07
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                  LZ,游戏快更新啊 
                  你不上去玩玩


                  284楼2008-12-24 13:56
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                    楼主加油。。 

                    边玩游戏边看,爽的很!大家也一起来玩数码宝贝把!
                    出了终极道具了!


                    285楼2008-12-24 14:55
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                      呵呵 很是邪恶 呀~


                      286楼2008-12-24 18:16
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                        D


                        287楼2008-12-24 18:52
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                          DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD


                          IP属地:福建288楼2008-12-24 20:07
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                            289楼2008-12-24 21:03
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                              LS的同志:
                              你用的签签是蛤蟆哥哥赠给小灵的,你怎么能拿来用呢?
                              自己做一个嘛~~


                              290楼2008-12-25 07:03
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