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Good morning professors,my name is jinyunyao,thanks for giving me an opportunity for this interview and i hope i can make a good performance today.let me introduce myself briefly.
In 1995,I was born in shaoxing,zhejiang province,shaoxing is an ancient city with a long history.when i was 18 years old,i come to handan, hebei province.handan is also an ancient city with a history for more than 3000 years.my major in handan college is history.during the past four years,i have learned many specialized courses and read many kinds of books .in the first year in college ,i was indulged myself in library from8 o’clock to 18 o’clock.i read history,literary,philosophy,English ,arts,and even geography.i was astonished by the progress tha i had made and i really miss that time (我很怀念那段时光,在傍晚时分阳光透过图书馆的窗户洒在我的脸上)
Later, i successfully passed the CET4 and CET6.Luckily,in the second semester (大二第二学期),i acquired the second prize of the national English contest for college students.after the contest,i started to read professional articles in journal which helped me lay a foundation for learning history.
After several years of study,我发现自己对历史的兴味更浓了,我有志于从事历史领域的学习工作。But i realized that what i had learned was not enough for my goal. I’m eager to further my study and raise my professional level.
That’s all, thank you so much.


IP属地:浙江1楼2017-02-24 16:03回复


    来自iPhone客户端2楼2017-03-03 15:39
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      2025-06-04 04:13:09
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      Good morning professors,my name is jinyunyao,thanks for giving me an opportunity for this interview and i hope i can make a good performance today.let me introduce myself briefly.
      In 1995,I was born in shaoxing,zhejiang province,which is a city with a long history of more than 2500 years.Shaoxing is the birthplace of many famous scholars, writers and artists, including Lu You,a famous poet in the southern song dynasty ,Cai Yuanpei, a famous educator, Lu Xun, a novelist, as well as Qiu Jin, a heroine.live in this ancient city,i was interested in learning history since my childhood.when i was 18 years old,i was admitted to handan college as a major in history.handan is also an ancient city with a history for more than 3000 years.during the past four years,i have learned many specialized courses and read many kinds of books .in the first year in college , i was indulged myself in library from8 o’clock to 18 o’clock.i read history,literary,philosophy,English ,arts,and even geography.i was astonished by the progress that i had made and now I really miss the time when the sun shines on my face through the window of the library in the evening.
      What’s more, i successfully passed the CET4 and CET6.Luckily,during the second semester of my sophomore year,i won the second prize of the national English contest for college students.after the contest,i started to read professional articles in journal which helped me lay a foundation for learning history.
      After several years of study,i found myself more interested in learning history ,and i aspired to do history research. .But i realized that what i had learned was not enough for my goal. I’m eager to further my study and raise my professional level.
      That’s all, thank you so much.
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      IP属地:浙江3楼2017-03-03 21:51
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        你去做master/phd的面试吗,还是交作业啊……


        IP属地:浙江4楼2017-03-06 19:52
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