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作为12及的大神我写下了这篇文章

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I am a computer information technology student who have graduated from the university of south Australia in Adelaide. During the period of 2011 to 2013, I was not an alumni student, but recently ,I have realized the importance of studying further in Sydney. So that's why I am writing down this letter to apply for a better education in Sydney. After searching online , I found the university of Sydney would fit me perfectly in computer major because it is famous in this program
First, Sydney is a metropolitan city which has the most advanced education in the world, so that I could being educated well. Second, the tuition is quite acceptable to me which is much lower than other countries so that I won't stress myself quite much by living expense. Third, Sydney is a good place for overseas student to study which is a peaceful and enjoyable city to have with. Finally, the climate is totally different from China, so that I could experience an alternative weather under the same sky. Considering above reasons, I decided to go to Sydney for my further education


来自iPhone客户端1楼2016-10-08 00:28回复
    My ordinary score will tell you that I am not good at oriented exams. Those strange examination skills are not suited me. An expectation drives me to learn top and advanced technology through practical operation and meet the real demand from the society. Therefore, I was required to read abundant material such as books and journals to full fill my desire in obtaining useful information and was also required to do diversity website searching in order to get the latest theory. Besides this, after participating in school activities, I have also taken some part time job to get myself improved


    来自iPhone客户端2楼2016-10-08 00:29
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      In my sophomore year, while other students devoted themselves into the world of PC games , I began my part time job by working as a system maintainer in Karmic. Unfortunately, it is useless to put theory into practical issue by solving tricky problem here. After being trapped by this, I required some help from senior technician and made myself by learning Html and CSS to maintain the web to be alive. From the first attempt to the society, I found lots of embarrassed situation that I had never experienced before. But difficulties did not have enough power to defeat me, although, I have fully trapped by combination different databases. Finally, I still solved this problem individually.


      来自iPhone客户端3楼2016-10-08 00:29
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        After keeping consistently efforts from my advantage, I was finally kissed by a chance from karbec, to take part in developing clients project, in which I worked as a programmer to develop the database using php. To gather the information from the client by arranging a weekly conference, getting instant feedback from weekly communication via emails. After gathering information from the client, designing a prototype for the website which would fill all clients' requirements. Once the client accepted that initially blue map, I was asked to program it into a real product and posted on the website to make real profit. But I found the first tricky task is to create that database. Since php is not mentioned in our study, to study php by myself is quite essential. After reading all the material that relates to php, I finally made that database done by seeking some help from my colleges. Next difficult task is the compatibility among different databases. Some databases are using Android system whereas some are using IOS system. By some circumstances, those two separated databases aimed to be updated at the same time to the final database, but final database won't give immediately response to one of them. The solution to this is to link smaller databases first. Last terrible task is about the failure of making the prototype of the website to be recognized by different browsers such as google chorome.Some latest browser may not support php code. I found a plug-in is quite suitable to solve this problem which is easy for the php making website to be tested by google.


        来自iPhone客户端4楼2016-10-08 00:29
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          brilliant 😃


          IP属地:北京来自Android客户端5楼2016-10-08 00:32
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            听老师说Play这个单词有第三种意思是什么?


            IP属地:广西7楼2016-10-08 00:58
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              开头干嘛那么啰嗦?不就个挨踢嘛。好吧,开玩笑,你直接说学IT就行。


              IP属地:辽宁来自iPhone客户端8楼2016-10-08 08:43
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                额,写的一般吧。有些地方觉得有点怪怪的


                IP属地:江苏来自iPhone客户端9楼2016-10-08 08:56
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                  面试题啊


                  来自iPhone客户端10楼2016-10-08 09:03
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                    As a weii-educated guy,author,it was some stigma or awkwardness of you writing this article,due to its prominent Chinese voices and characteristics.
                    In other word, you wrote down Chinglish instead of orthodox English


                    IP属地:浙江12楼2016-10-08 09:32
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                      节奏大师,你说的是中式英语


                      IP属地:浙江14楼2016-10-08 09:43
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                        好多错误。。。


                        IP属地:马来西亚15楼2016-10-08 09:46
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                          12及?


                          16楼2016-10-08 09:56
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                            破事水


                            17楼2016-10-08 11:16
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                              恭迎大哥出山


                              IP属地:安徽18楼2016-10-08 12:34
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