自己翻译，求鉴赏。有什么不对请提出。
Mars.
火星.
We laid our names to rest along the dotted line.
We left our date of birth and our history behind.
We were full of life,we could barely hold it in.
我们签下我们的名字，
沿着虚线。
我们遗忘我们的出生日期和我们其中的历史。
我们的生命曾是那么地充满生机，
我们却无法抓住它。
We were amateurs at war,strangers to suffering.
We made our families proud but scared at the same time.
We promised we'd be safe,another lie from the front lines.
战争中我们如同菜鸟，
陌生地面对痛苦。
我们令我们的家人感到骄傲，但同时也感到恐惧。
我们承诺过我们会安全的，
又一个从前线传来的谎言。
Our backs against the wall,we're surrounded and afraid.
Our lives now in the hands of the soldiers taking aim.
我们背靠着墙，我们因被包围而害怕着。
如今我们性命掌握在前线士兵们的手中。
Our questions ricochet like broken satellites:
How our bodies, born to heal,become so prone to die?
Though time is ruthless,it showed us kindness in the end,
By slowing down enough, a second chance to make amends.
我们的问题所反映的如同被肢解的卫星：
为何我们好好的身体却要面对死亡？
尽管时间无情，但它最终还是给我们展现出善良，
放慢时间，又一次机会去弥补。
As life replayed, we heard a voice proclaim:
"lay your weapons down! They're calling off the war on account of losing track of what we're fighting for."
随着生命重演，我们听到一个声音传来：
“放下你的武器！他们在喊停战争，
基于我们为迷失之迹而战斗着”
So we found our way back home,let our cuts and bruises heal.
While a brand-new war began,
One that no one else could feel.
Our nights have grown so long.
之后我们找到了回家的路，让我们的伤与痕愈合。
而一场全新的战争开始酝酿，
无人察觉。
我们的夜晚变得如此漫长。
Now we beg for sound advice.
"let the brokenness be felt
'til you reach the other side.
There is goodness in the heart of every broken man who comes right up to the edge of losing everything he has."
现在我们聆听回音。
“当你到达彼岸之时让残躯感到共鸣。
人心本善，
尽管失去曾经拥有的一切。”
We were young enough to sign along the dotted line.
Now we're young enough to try
To build a better life.
To build a better life.
我们还年轻，
可以在协议上签下名字。
现在我们还年轻，还可以尝试
重建家园。
重建家园。