以下是本人用壮文写作的一篇文章。第一稿,还没仔细修改,提早拿出来与关心壮文的贝侬分享:
Ranz Manz
Mbanj gou miz ranz vunz he, vunzlai cungj heuh ranz de guh ranz manz. Deng vunz heuh guh ranz manz, dwg aenvih song boh lwg ranz neix cungj manz dai.
Gangj daxboh manz haenx gonq. Seiz lij guh bouxcoz, de caeuq ndaw mbanj boux vunz he guhceng, songde cungj gangj swjgeij mbei hung, gijmaz fangz cungj ndi lau, ceng bae ceng dauq, boux ndi fug boux, daengzlaeng boux manz haenx yienghneix gangj vah manz:“Bae ra song fag limz daeuj, songraeuz doiqnaj, mwngz dawz fag hwnj hoz gou, gou dawz fag limz hwnj hoz mwngz, heuh ‘it ngeih sam’ le, raeuz doengzseiz rag limz gvej hoz, yawj bouxlawz dai gonq!”
“Guh couh guh, lau dai ndi dwg bouxsai!”Bouxvunz doengz mbanj haenx mbouj fugheiq.
Daengz ngoenz daihngeih, boux manz haenx guhcaen lo, de muz song fag limz raeh daengz daeq ndaej bwn’gyaeuj, dawz limz bae daengz ranz boux doengzmbanj haenx naeuz:“Guh loha,ngoenzneix yawj byawz dai gonq!”Gangj sat, dawz fag limz hwnj hoz swhgeij bae, youh dawz lingh fag lim hwnj hoz vunzmbanj haenx bae, boux doengzmbanj haenx siengj mbouj daengz bouxmanz neix guhcaen, seizneix limz hwnj hoz le saenzgywggywg deuz nyouh conh……
Gienh saeh neix fatseng youq gaijfang gaxgonq, gienh saeh neix dwg caen lwi gou ndi ndaej raen, dan dwg dingq bouxlaux gangjgoj gangj gvaq.
Gou caen raen gvaq bouxvunz manz, dwg boux doengzhag siujyoz gou. Boux doengzhag neix couh dwg daeglwg bouxvunz manz haenx. Boh dwg vunzmanz, seng ok duz lwg hix manz dai.
Miz haemh he, dou geij boux lwgnyez doxdoj, beij bouxlawza mbei hung. haemhlaep ok mbanj bae, byawz deuz ma gonq byawz couh dwg lwg laudai, byawz dauqma ceiqlaeng de couh dwg lwg mbei hung. Youq nienzdaih haenx, ok mbanj dou bae ndi gyae dauqcawq miz moh, vunz mbanj dai le cungj dawz bae haenx moek. Dou lwgnyez banhaemh cungj lau gag byaij gvaq dieg moh, dingq vunz gangj mbwn laep byaij gvaq haenx gingciengz miz feizfangz gaenlaeng, bingzseiz mbwnlaep le mboujmiz bouxlaux daiqloh, dou cungj lau ok mbanj bae. Haemhhanex, dou geij boux laudai haenx caengz ok mbanj, couh deuz dauqma lo. Dou ma daengz ranz gig nanz seizgan le, lij ndi raen lwg manz haenx dauqma, dou lai de caen deng fangz rag bae lo, couh lwnh hawj bouxlaux nyi. Bouxlaux dawz dienhdoengz daiq dou ok mbanj bae ra, ra bae gig gyae cij raen de. Seixhaenx, bouxlaux caeuq dou cungj doeksaet lo: Lwg manz haenx ninz youq henz moh, moh haenx loh ok aen gang cang ndoek, de got ndaek ndoek vunzdai ninzndaekfofo……
Daj baez neix hwnj, dou bang lwgnyez bouxboux cungj lau lwgmanz lo. bouxboux cungj fug de dwg lwg mbei hung. De riu dou mbei iq lumj duznou, yienghneix suenq maz bouxsai, lajga begbeg aemq diuz viz mbouj miz yungh.
Doeklaeng, youh fatseng song gienh saeh manz he.
Gienh saeh daih’it, dwg boh manz dawz cungq aeu nyingz daxmah de. Seizdaih haenx ndaw mbanj miz minzbingh yingzcangj, boh manz ndaej guh hak neix, lij ndaej fat fag cungq he hawj de dawz. Miz ngoenz he, de caeuq mehlaux swhgeij cengbak, de manz hwnjdaeuj couh dawz cungq yaek nyingz mehlaux. De guh saeh manz neix le, couh mbouj ndaej dang minzbingh yingzcangj, fag cungq hix deng sou bae lo .
Gienh saeh daihngeih, dwg lwg manz aeu hanzhaz yied dai gaeqlwg vunz. Miz ngoenz he, duz gaeqmeh ranzhenz daiq bang gaeqlwg haeuj ranz de ra gwn, lwg manz raen gij gaeqlwg gwn haeuxgoek ranz de le, huj hwnjdaeuj dawz diuz hanzhaz bibi baba yied dai geij duz gaeqlwg bae, caeklaiq duz gaeqmeh deuz ndaej vaiq, mboujne hix deng dub yungz lo.
Ranz vunz neix boh lwg cungj manz baenz yienghneix, vunzmbanj bouxboux cungj lau ranz vunz de, vunzmbanj comz gwn laeuj bouxboux cungj gik caeuq bohlwg de doengzdaiz, bae ndoi goenx haz bouxboux gik caeuq bohlwg de guhdoih. Cungj vunz manz neix, daengz dai hix ndi miz vunz gyawj de.
Daj baez neix hwnj, dou bang lwgnyez bouxboux cungj lau lwgmanz lo. bouxboux cungj fug de dwg lwg mbei hung. De riu dou mbei iq lumj duznou, yienghneix suenq maz bouxsai, lajga begbeg aemq diuz viz mbouj miz yungh.
Doeklaeng, youh fatseng song gienh saeh manz he.
Gienh saeh daih’it, dwg boh manz dawz cungq aeu nyingz daxmah de. Seizdaih haenx ndaw mbanj miz minzbingh yingzcangj, boh manz ndaej guh hak neix, lij ndaej fat fag cungq he hawj de dawz. Miz ngoenz he, de caeuq mehlaux swhgeij cengbak, de manz hwnjdaeuj couh dawz cungq yaek nyingz mehlaux. De guh saeh manz neix le, couh mbouj ndaej dang minzbingh yingzcangj, fag cungq hix deng sou bae lo .
Gienh saeh daihngeih, dwg lwg manz aeu hanzhaz yied dai gaeqlwg vunz. Miz ngoenz he, duz gaeqmeh ranzhenz daiq bang gaeqlwg haeuj ranz de ra gwn, lwg manz raen gij gaeqlwg gwn haeuxgoek ranz de le, huj hwnjdaeuj dawz diuz hanzhaz bibi baba yied dai geij duz gaeqlwg bae, caeklaiq duz gaeqmeh deuz ndaej vaiq, mboujne hix deng dub yungz lo.
Ranz vunz neix boh lwg cungj manz baenz yienghneix, vunzmbanj bouxboux cungj lau ranz vunz de, vunzmbanj comz gwn laeuj bouxboux cungj gik caeuq bohlwg de doengzdaiz, bae ndoi goenx haz bouxboux gik caeuq bohlwg de guhdoih. Cungj vunz manz neix, daengz dai hix ndi miz vunz gyawj de.
注:用我们家乡壮话构思、行文,与壮语标准语扣得不紧,但书写都尽量按照标准壮文。
谢谢指教!最希望指出具体修改点,以便二稿修改。