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题目:Good habits result from resisting temptation.
"Good habits result from resisting temptation", has been widely accepted.It tells us that if cultivate moral habit in childhood may bring benefits to further learning.Which could be involved in good habits?Care, diligent and hardworking are all could be on the list.The truth of it is deep and profound among adults and through this way taught their kid.
There are numerous examples supporting this proverb.A case in point is, when people do online shopping, it's unwise for buyers to buy so many things at one time,.What's more when shoppers received the deliverys, unpacked it, then feel so exhausting.This is closed to netizens ' behavior of excessive net expense wasting.For another example, a majority of prepaid consumption on credit cards for giving your products ahead of paying the money.Be due to pupil can't afford the debts. They used it before pay all the money for it.
What's worse this phenomenon causes their credit loss.Judging from the evidence offered. We might safely draw the conclusion that good habits such as thinking over in mind behind what they are doing next are especially significant. Not only good habits can save money, but also cautious's characteristic can promote people's way of life's quality and make people think the world better.
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1楼2015-11-21 09:53回复
    第一段
    "Good habits result from resisting temptation", has been widely accepted.It tells us that if cultivate moral habit in childhood may bring benefits to further learning.Which could be involved in good habits?Care, diligent and hardworking are all could be on the list.The truth of it is deep and profound among adults and through this way taught their kid.。


    2楼2015-11-21 09:54
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      2025-06-12 14:39:38
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      第二段。
      There are numerous examples supporting this proverb.A case in point is, when people do online shopping, it's unwise for buyers to buy so many things at one time,.What's more when shoppers received the deliverys, unpacked it, then feel so exhausting.This is closed to netizens ' behavior of excessive net expense wasting.For another example, a majority of prepaid consumption on credit cards for giving your products ahead of paying the money.Be due to pupil can't afford the debts. They used it before pay all the money for it.
      What's worse this phenomenon causes their credit loss.


      3楼2015-11-21 09:54
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        第三段。
        Judging from the evidence offered. We might safely draw the conclusion that good habits such as thinking over in mind behind what they are doing next are especially significant. Not only good habits can save money, but also cautious's characteristic can promote people's way of life's quality and make people think the world better.


        4楼2015-11-21 09:55
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          说实话你这语法有点混乱,而且有点偏题啊,看下来没看到抵制诱惑是怎么养成好习惯的


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