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On January 4, 1643, in England, Lincolnshire town with PU cable of a self
cultivation farm family, Newton was born. Newton was a premature infant, who also did not expect this seems not worth mentioning little things will become an unprecedented scientific giant, and he lived to be84 years old.
Newton was born three months before his father died. When he was two years old, his mother remarried to a priest, left Newton illiterate grandmother side support. Newton childhood be scanty of words, stubborn personality, this habit may come from his family situation.
Newton be scanty of words make him more like thinking, he planted the apple tree slowly grown up; approximately from the age of five, Newton was sent to the public school. As a teenager Newton and not a prodigy, he qualified normal, average, but he likes reading books, like to see some introduced a variety of simple mechanical model making method of reading, and be inspired from, DIY strange gadgets, such as cars, wooden bell, folding lantern etc..
Newton in the middle school academic performance is not outstanding, just like reading, the natural phenomenon with curiosity, especially geometry, Copernicus's heliocentric theory etc.. He also be arranged to record reading notes, and create new styles like the some gadgets, tips, gizmo, small test.
Later forced to live, mother let Newton suspended for farmers at home, raising a family. But Newton had the chance working roll, and often forget work. Every time, mother told him the same as a market, familiar with the trade business, he begged the servant of a person in Shangjie, he was hiding in the bushes after read a book. On one occasion, Newton's uncle was suspicious, on the track listing to Newton Town, found his nephew with legs outstretched, lying on the grass, is concentrate one's attention on study of a mathematical problem. Newton's good spirits moved to uncle uncle, then persuaded mother to let
Newton return, and encourages Newton university. Newton returned to school, be like hunger and thirst to learn the book nutrition. Once, he went to play outside, after relying on under an apple tree to rest, suddenly, an apple falling from a tree. He felt very strange, why Apple will be from the top down rather than from bottom to up? He took it home study, he later discovered that the earth is through argumentation has gravity can make objects. Subsequently, appeared" Newton physical gravity".


IP属地:云南1楼2015-09-19 21:40回复
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    IP属地:云南2楼2015-09-19 21:42
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      2025-07-27 23:54:33
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      IP属地:北京3楼2015-09-19 22:03
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