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楼主在新加坡工作,刚写了一份投诉信,大家帮忙给检查下,多谢!

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about my terrible experience in Feline Bridal store.
I signed up my packge with Bobo on the road show, she is very nice and paitient. We finished the photo shoot on 31st January 2015, and I'm quite satisfied with it. The photographer is great! I can't remember his name already, and i only know he's from Malaysia.
Everything seems to be fine until the photo selection, i had terrible experience with Wendy's assistant. She keep on pushing us to finish the selection, because there is someone waiting for her outside the shop, and we finished our selection perfunctory. You can check the CCTV if you want.
Anyway, i still can live with that. But when i saw the album, I was extremely angry!! Me and my wife keep blam each other and fight with each other, and she even want to burn the album!
Because I was not in Singapore at that time, and my wife is also very busy, so we didn't do anything. But every time I open that album, I feel very uncomfortable.
I attach those photos, please take a look and you will understand me. And we must insist that you should make a new album for us. If we do not receive adequate compensation, we will be forced to write to the newspaper and post those photos that your company made.
Yours faithfully
Eric Su
357527275@qq.com


1楼2015-05-14 17:55回复
    虽然在国外,但是英语还是很水,所以希望大家能帮忙看看还有没有语法错误。其实新加坡人的英语也不咋地……


    2楼2015-05-14 17:56
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      因为是投诉信 所以如果有语法错误就太丢人了 。。。


      3楼2015-05-14 17:58
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        投诉的主要内容就是我在新加坡一个影楼照的婚纱照,照片到是很好,但是我在选片的时候那个人非常不耐烦,导致我们选的照片也不好,草草的就选完了,有些还是重复的。而且最后给我们做出来的相册把照片都拼到一起去了,弄得我和媳妇光吵架


        4楼2015-05-14 18:00
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          挺好的,must insist去掉must


          IP属地:山东来自Android客户端5楼2015-05-14 18:02
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            时态太支那。


            6楼2015-05-14 18:02
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              没人吗? 放一张图试试


              8楼2015-05-14 18:05
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                报章会觉得有新闻价值吗?
                LZ去搜搜消费人协会的资料吧。


                9楼2015-05-14 19:33
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                  I am writting for my blablablalbla.我为,,,写信
                  I cannot remember his name but blablalblabla我不记得他的名字但是记得
                  I could not stand blablablabla 我不能忍受
                  she kept on pushing me,你的用的keep 应该是过去式,,because there's still someone waiting outside 就可以了
                  是perfunctorily而不是形容词形式
                  kept blaming 你是 keep blame wanted 你也用的want 注意时态啊 大哥 my wife was busy不是is 即便一直很忙也应该是has been busy
                  I attach 最好是I‘d like to attach 体现大度,礼貌
                  I am insistent for a new album,and if you hold objection,i will write for the papers to give you a shame.


                  10楼2015-05-14 20:03
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