急求大神帮我改错

Dear Mr Wilson:
I know you from my former classmate "名字呢！！！“ (which(who) is your friend)感觉这句多余，有名字认识就认识）.I am plan(ing) to pursue(to后面没有ing！！！) my master degree in your school. So (主语呢！！！I am wrting )write to ask some questions about living and studying in SUNY.
First, I want to live myself （什么叫live myself......).Are there have (不用have！！！！）single drom（drom是什么鬼？？？？） with air-conditioning and toilet（你去哪？？美国不说toilet，，toilet是马桶的意思。。。你想说洗手间还是什么？？？？）?Maybe single apartment is ok.Second, I don’t know which teacher is good in your school.How about the students?A good learning atmosphere ia important for me Hope that students can help each other.How about the library?Are there have enough seats?And the amount of books can meet our need?Third, How about the transportation to the school?Do it convenient?Are there have any bars？I hope there have many party I can take.
I would appreciate if you can answer me.Thank you for read my letter.You can reply me by Emil ****@qq.com.
Sincerely,
Cherry
先改那么多，需要在找我！！！！！！

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第二句 I plan to purse
第三句So I write to you for asking
第四句I want to live alone
single dormitory
Hope that改成I hope that
Can the amount of book meet our need ?
Do it convenient改成Is it convenient
I hope that there are many parties I can take part in
I would appreciate it if
Thank you for reading my letter
email

there are 跟have 是一个意思，不能共存。用了there are就不要 have