I love a lot后面要加宾语，句子蛮散的，用几个连词就好

Could u promise u like mr.莫actually？你确定不是青春偶像韩寒、郭小四、沧月、安妮baby…？

I love a lot 可以改成 i love lots of things等等

They can make me feel relaxed

倒数第三句看不懂

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Good morning !
It is really my honor to have this chance for the speech.
My name is XXX.I'm 16 years old.Right now,I'm a student.I like to read and write very much in the spare time because they both give me a lot of fun.My favorite writer is Moyan and currently I am reading a book by him which is called"Hong gao liang".Every day I keep reading it for an hour .
I have many interests. I love playing the guitar and singing English songs. Because they can make me fell relaxed.I like making friends as well. Therefore I have lots of good friends and I hope you would like to be my friend too.
All above are real. I hope everyone has been enjoyed listening to me and will like me. Thank you.
简单改了下有几个地方看不太懂

it is my honored to have this opportunity to give a speech,
My name is XXX, i am a 16 years old middle school student. I love to reading and writing, i am having fun while doing both. My facorite writer is Moyan, right now i am reading one of his books and i am loving it, it is call Hong Gao Liang, i am reading it on a daily routine. I also love playing the guitar and singing english songs, they make me feel relaxing. last and not least, i love making friends, i hope we can be friend for lifetime. Thanks everyone.
我尽力了... 改的不好抱歉~

Good