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求一篇写景抒情的记叙文

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各位大神,我求一篇写景抒情的记叙文。帮帮忙啊,景色感情随便


来自Android青春福利版1楼2014-05-24 23:28回复
    渣渣的要不要


    IP属地:塞内加尔来自Android客户端2楼2014-05-25 09:31
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      来自Android客户端3楼2014-05-25 10:57
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        桃花
        一枝独秀,点开了梦里桃花轻悠悠。桃落翩翩,落下了嫣然一点沉香浅;数朵娇颜,映出了许许几分淡雅意绵绵。年年岁岁,时过境迁。人面不晓何处去,桃花依旧笑春风—观桃花所感
        若是世间百花相争,素面君子之梨也好,美艳玲珑之李也罢,又怎与这絮絮的“落春之雪”所媲美?蘸墨提笔,思绪如千
        “桃花一簇开无主,可爱深红映浅红”一蓠白墙之后,只见满园春色---胭脂三月红透水,琉璃浅粉醉人心。回眸,杂交相错的嫣然之色,淡染于丝丝柳绿,浸色于萋萋芳草。她美若娇人,俏若颜花,或生于浮华,或醉卧沉土。她的绽放,她的泯灭,只有痴醉她的人才会为此而欢,为此而悲。心随所想之处,桃花因念而绽。这情切切,意浓浓的爱花,又为何不让人所怜悯?
         “二月春归风雨天,碧桃花下感流年。残红尚有三千树,不及初开一朵鲜。”
        赞桃花,叹其意


        IP属地:塞内加尔来自Android客户端4楼2014-05-25 10:57
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          楼主我也在找这个。。我写的是初夏景色,但不知道抒什么情。。


          来自Android客户端5楼2014-05-25 11:13
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            平生最好的一篇文……
            听雨
            雨,淅沥沥的下着,狂风伴随着一股寒气向我们袭来。听,下雨的声音……
            早晨,去学校的路上,雨就不停地下,我打着伞,只感到一股股寒意。雨时大、时小、时柔、时细。打在地面上,水溅了起来,然后又落到地面上,像个活泼的孩子。雨,下得很大,地面上积起了一个个深深地水洼。
            雨,只有一种声音吗?不,雨的声音吗,可以是多种多样的。
            雨,打在衣架上,叮叮咚咚,像人们正敲着木琴,那声音,多么清脆;雨,打在雨伞上,沙沙,像人们拨动着古筝的琴弦,那声音,多么柔和;雨,打在雨搭上,滴滴哒哒,像人们敲击着鼓,那声音,多么有力;雨,打在花的叶子上,轻轻的,柔柔的,像人们轻轻叩击着桌面,那声音,多么悦耳;雨,打在墙面上,当当,像电铃的响声,那声音,多么响亮。
            只有我们用心去感受,才能发现雨的美,雨的独特之处。即使是人们认为平平常常的雨,听起来也别有一番韵味。


            IP属地:加拿大7楼2014-05-25 16:11
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