Dane Dehaan 【 分享 】学校里写的英语作文

写在前面：一定是楼楼原创的这个不用质疑。要是和有道雷同不胜荣幸~如果有语法错误要提出来吖，谢谢亲们……

My favourite actor is Dane Dehaan.
He comes from the United States.He is only 27 years ago.But he has already got married.
I knew Dane at first when I was watching the film called Amazing Spider-man 2.In the movie,Dane plays a young man called Harry Osbern.He is very smart and hamesome.But his kind heart overshadowed by fear.He wants to get the Spider-man‘s blood to save himself.To this end,he lost in his hatred...
Because of the film,Dane was an instant hit.People are praised his superb acting and his perfect face.Well,I‘m the one of them.When I look at him,I always feel excited and happy.
Hope the future of him will be better.And he will succed.

叫我小学渣……

其实我时态学得不大好。

绝逼真爱

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楼主很棒！
话说He is only 27 years ago.这句里的ago是不是应该是old。。。
另外提出一个建议， hamesome在写作文时尽量少用，虽然它和handsome是一个意思，但英语权威词典以及新词词典都没有收录该变体词，写作文用这个词不够严谨。还有succeed是不是少打了一个e。。。不喜勿喷哈