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On March 9,we held a class meeting on the theme of focusing on dusaster of all the classmates together with our head teacher.
IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端1楼2014-04-09 14:44回复
    In the decade,we suffered many disaster such as flood,earthquake,typhoon,sunami and forest fires.
    IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端2楼2014-04-09 14:44
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      All those disater bring about millions people death and destory many fertile soil.
      IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端3楼2014-04-09 14:44
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        To human's surprised,as human's behavied just like cut down the trees,serious environmently pullution that lead to climate upheaval.
        IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端4楼2014-04-09 14:45
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          The earth is our home,we should protect it and construction of a better for our living.
          IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端5楼2014-04-09 14:45
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            that is all，thank you
            IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端6楼2014-04-09 14:46
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              IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端7楼2014-04-10 07:48
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                @loerina come here，help me，please.
                forgive mine poor enlglih
                IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端8楼2014-04-10 07:49
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                  我是来打酱油的.
                  IP属地:广东来自iPhone客户端9楼2014-04-10 07:52
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                    perhaps becauae of mine chinexe title.these no people reply(bird) me
                    IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端10楼2014-04-10 07:59
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                      天哪~词汇量太少~每次做阅读理解和完形填空都得不了高分~怎么办~？求帮助~
                      IP属地:四川来自Android客户端11楼2014-04-10 08:02
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                        In the decade,we suffered many disaster such as flood,earthquake,typhoon,sunami and forest fires.
                        来自Android客户端12楼2014-04-10 08:22
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                          韩国人毁了中国女人。日本人毁了中国男人。
                          IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端13楼2014-04-10 08:23
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                            @Horus黑焱龙
                            sincerely thank you.
                            with your help i can get the first prize.
                            i will try to improve my english
                            IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端14楼2014-04-10 08:40
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