I wrote a PS to attend a competition ,but I don't know whether it has some mistakes ,and I just want you can help me refer to the mistakes .Thank you !
here it is .
"Vatano
good morning everyone .I am very glad to meet you here .my name is XXX .I study in XXX No .1middle school .I think I am a little shy but I am willing to communicate with others .So that I think I have a little bit friends .As for my study ,at first ,I was occupied with my lessons and homework .and it didn't make any differences until the day ,when I realize that the study should be enjoyed ,and the knowledge should be leant well so that we can use it properly .So my motor is "man who travel far know more "Moreover ,I also like many sports ,like table tennis ,volleyball and basketball and so on .Otherwise ,in my life ,Even though I can't do the best. But I will do everyting as well as I can.
because I think living in present is quite right .Do you think so ?It's a real me ,that's all that I want to say ,thank you ."
HELP !
here it is .
"Vatano
good morning everyone .I am very glad to meet you here .my name is XXX .I study in XXX No .1middle school .I think I am a little shy but I am willing to communicate with others .So that I think I have a little bit friends .As for my study ,at first ,I was occupied with my lessons and homework .and it didn't make any differences until the day ,when I realize that the study should be enjoyed ,and the knowledge should be leant well so that we can use it properly .So my motor is "man who travel far know more "Moreover ,I also like many sports ,like table tennis ,volleyball and basketball and so on .Otherwise ,in my life ,Even though I can't do the best. But I will do everyting as well as I can.
because I think living in present is quite right .Do you think so ?It's a real me ,that's all that I want to say ,thank you ."
HELP !
