文风揣摩的很到位。不得不说楼主花了相当的心思啊。
有一些内容是在其他作品里参考的，组织的水到渠成顺其自然，而且一些措辞都和
村长的风格很像啊！！！
膜拜！！

来了
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虽然结尾结的明显仓促，不过真的感谢楼主，原了我局外人的念想。

填坑神马的最有爱了。
文笔真的很细腻!

爱简捷。。

楼主写的真心很好看

朝小诚这此小说我都看过了，我也是最喜欢《局外人》这部，但是一直没有更新，等得好苦啊，什么时候写番外篇，或许写一部完整，让我们解解渴啊。。。。。

好看

好呀！

好文，顶！！！

楼主加油 字字珠玑！

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很好看
　　　--退出武林，封剑隐居，从此不问外世，专生儿子。