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写得很好!!加油!!


78楼2005-08-04 14:32
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    来了又不


    79楼2005-08-04 15:26
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      80楼2005-08-04 16:07
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        你天没来


        81楼2005-08-05 14:53
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          D


          82楼2005-08-05 15:11
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            呀呀的
            更新了
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            “好了,我们开始吃便当!!”“什么呀!我答应了吗??”“切!你少

            装蒜了。”“我有吗!有吗??”“快点,吃饭了!”说着一把把篮子夺

            过来,“喂!!”“我不叫喂!”“你别动我的便当!”“那可不行。”

            “这个算是你给我的补偿!”“凭什么?还有其他办法可以补偿的!”

            “但我就要这个补偿。”“你你你...你怎么这么不讲理。”“切!也不知

            道谁不讲理!”
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            就写到这里了。


            83楼2005-08-05 15:18
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              太少了,再写一点吧!
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              “哦!这么说是我不讲理了。”“当然是你了!”说着打开了篮子,

              “喂!”“不是说过了别叫我喂了吗!”说完拿一个鱿鱼就朝嘴里放,

              “哇!难吃死了!”“你!给你吃了还说难吃!”“喂!你说什么话呢?

              这么难吃的东西还敢拿出来!”“你……不好吃就别吃,别在这里伤人自

              尊心。”“是吗?那我就走喽!”“走就走,哪来这么多的废话。”

              “切!那就拜拜了。”说完犬夜叉头也不回的走掉了,“这个家伙,吃了

              东西就跑,还说难吃,看我怎么整他!!”戈薇小声嘀咕着。


              84楼2005-08-05 15:27
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                555~~
                居然灭有人顶~~~~~~~~~


                85楼2005-08-05 19:56
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                  86楼2005-08-05 22:01
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                    87楼2005-08-06 10:44
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                      谢谢哈
                      我改名字了
                      希望大家支持!!


                      删除|88楼2005-08-06 11:26
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                        顶!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~继续


                        89楼2005-08-10 21:30
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                          今天开始更新!


                          90楼2005-08-11 13:58
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                            犬夜叉手插在裤袋里,那个八婆,那么难吃的东西居然还敢拿出来,走着

                            走着,发现前面有一个人站在那边,犬夜叉出于好奇,就走了过去,一看

                            原来是桔梗,“你好呀!”犬夜叉打了个招呼,“恩~~”没有一丝感情的

                            回答,沉默……犬夜叉受不了这种尴尬的气氛,刚要准备走掉,无意间却

                            看到桔梗的手在流血,“你的手……”“没什么……”依旧是没有感情的

                            回答,血越流越多,“不行,你的手流血了,要去医务室……”“不要你

                            管……”桔梗被这突如其来的关心融化了,语气没有刚才那种冷漠,犬夜

                            叉没有理她,“快走,到医务室去!”说着就拉着桔梗走,犬夜叉的力气

                            太大了,桔梗只好跟着走。


                            91楼2005-08-11 14:42
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                              来到医务室,“老师,她的手怎么样了?”“没什么,只是轻微伤而已,

                              没有大碍。”(说的跟要死人一样~~)

                              转换镜头

                              “没事了吧?”“恩!”语气中略带有一丝温柔,“那就好!”“我们出

                              去走走吧!”这是桔梗第一次和男生散步,“谢谢你!”“有什么好谢

                              的。”“……”沉默……“喂!”“怎么了?”“就是为什么你……”话

                              说到一半,犬夜叉又把另一半咽了下去,“说呀!”


                              92楼2005-08-11 20:42
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