thehungergames吧 关注:63,360贴子:1,080,963

回复:[THG]Cinna: Torchlight 炬光不灭

只看楼主收藏回复

小霞真厉害~
开头啥的很有感觉真的~语言很自然真的很棒!爱你的文风~加油!


IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧19楼2013-08-08 21:38
回复
    语言很棒!这里格子欢迎加入!


    来自手机贴吧20楼2013-08-08 22:08
    回复

      No.2 The Encounter
      It was a sunny day. After the routine midday nap, I was on the way to a party for top designers in the Capitol. When I say “top”, I’m not describing the fashion, you know.
      But I have to admit that our former host, Mrs. Snow, was at least better than I am at designing. Shame that she died a week before. Just because of some bad oysters.
      I was looking out of the car window, wondering who our new host will be. Then I saw her.
      Flowing black cloak, midnight blue dress that almost swept the street, black leather boots, and raven black hair in a long ponytail. All look utterly simple, but all with delicate stitches that made the tiny figure in it look powerful and mysterious. Her tread is light but steady, suggesting a hunter’s mind set. Thought I noticed all of above, there was one thing that made me stop the driver and jump off the car.
      Because only my sister could capture a real-looking rainbow on a piece of silk, just like the ribbon that girl was wearing.
      I followed her. She continued forward without stopping to rest, and it was nearly late afternoon when she stopped at the edge of a forest in the outskirt of the Capitol. Panting and weak, I approached her, thinking about how to explain the fact that I followed her all the way here, when she spoke.
      “Don’t move, or I’ll kill you here and now, Cinna.”
      I froze on the spot as she turned around swiftly. She was wearing a mask that covered half of her face, and her sharp blue eyes were piercing mine. “Who are you? How did you know my name?”
      She gave me a small smile: “You will know. But now, I’m introducing you to someone else.”
      Then she turned to the woods again, and called out: “There he is, Portia.”
      -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
      中文晚上或明天哦亲们~


      IP属地:江苏21楼2013-08-09 15:03
      回复

        No.2 神秘偶遇
        那是个阳光灿烂的日子。照例午睡后,我正在去一个凯匹特高级设计师聚会的路上。“高级”这个词并不是用来描述时尚品味的——你懂的。
        但我必须承认,我们从前的主办人斯诺夫人的设计才华至少要比我优秀。只可惜她上周死了,因为吃了变质的牡蛎。
        我盯着车窗外看,想着谁会是我们的新主办。然后我看到了她。
        飘逸的黑色斗篷,几乎触及地面的星空蓝长裙,黑色皮靴,黑亮的头发拢成一个长长的马尾——看上去极其简单的装束,却有着精细的剪裁,让那个小小的身影显得强大而神秘。她的脚步轻盈而沉稳,暗示着她猎手的性格。这些我全注意到了,但只有一个理由会让我急忙叫司机停车让我下去。
        因为只有我的小妹妹,才能在丝绸上绘出一道足可乱真的彩虹,就像女孩发带上的那样。
        我跟上了她。她一直向前走,根本不停下来休息。当她在凯匹特郊外一片树林的边缘停下来时,天色已近黄昏。我气喘吁吁疲惫地接近她,想着怎么解释我一直跟踪她到了这里时,她说话了。
        “不要动,西纳,不然我现在就在这里杀了你。”
        我僵在了原地,看着她轻巧地转过身。她带着面具,挡住了半边脸,锐利的蓝眼睛直盯住我的目光。“你是谁?怎么会知道我的名字?”
        女孩浅浅地微笑:“你会知道的,但现在我要先介绍你认识一个人。”
        接着她再次转向树林:“他来了,波蒂亚。”


        IP属地:江苏22楼2013-08-09 18:41
        回复
          沙发哦!!小霞加油!!这里小萱,一定会支持你的文文哒~


          来自手机贴吧23楼2013-08-09 18:44
          收起回复
            @roseAlily @ 丿挽尊 @风飞花の美丽 @Bill_Lola @弯弯Serair @阳のsasa 今晚就这些,明天继续艾特~


            IP属地:江苏24楼2013-08-09 18:55
            收起回复
              人工置顶。。。悲催的孩子手机被没收了,本来想去玩杀人游戏。。。


              IP属地:江苏25楼2013-08-10 09:56
              收起回复
                很不错= =但我怎么感觉Sherry会成为文章的一个伏笔……


                来自iPhone客户端26楼2013-08-10 11:25
                收起回复
                  @rsx061 @弯弯Serair @苏v井爱 @阳のsasa @米斯特诺亚 @薄荷へ面包 @丿挽尊 @roseAlily @风飞花の美丽 @郭蕊的梦 @幽幽妹子muma @Bill_Lola 军训回来发现自己半个月欠了一屁股文债。。。(对了蓝莓飒飒我还在等你们更文。。。坚果你要继续。。。)新高一党要住校伤不起。。。手机还被没收。。。先来一段,以后争取隔周更或者月更。。。至于鲍照。。。再说吧(捂脸)
                  -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
                  No.3 The Mystery
                  A smaller girl emerged from the woods.
                  Dark hair with lovely curls, a face that speaks of cuteness and wisdom, the strikingly familiar rainbow ribbon around her left wrist.
                  “Sherry?” I asked before I realized my mistake. The girl had brown eyes, not those green ones with flecks of gold that I shared with my sister. I glanced at the masked girl, who didn’t respond.
                  Portia took small steps towards me, not in the skipping way like Sherry usually did. She looked up at me. Then she burst into tears.
                  Out of nowhere, a chill went up my spine. Only when someone was killed in a Hunger Games would Sherry have cried. She’s no crybaby. Neither was Portia, I can tell by her branch-torn outfit and toughened feature. Then what?
                  Portia pushed something she’s been clutching tightly into my hands. It was wrapped in brown paper. Then before I could say anything, she turned around and ran back towards the woods. I heard her sobs before she disappeared from my sight.
                  “She still couldn’t face you. But after all...you must remember it wasn’t her fault.” The masked girl sighed. “Remember, don’t let your family see this. Return at this time tomorrow if you decide to trust us.”
                  “I didn’t understand.” I whispered.
                  “You will.” She smiled again, signaling me to leave. “And you must.”
                  As I walked back towards the direction of home, I saw Portia had returned. She buried her face in the girl’s long cloak. The setting sun cast bright shades of gold on both of them. The blue eyes staring at me were surprisingly soft.
                  I hired a car, spared my parents worry by telling them I had been dropping in at a friend’s and forgot the time, and locked myself in my bedroom. I looked at the little package, and doubt finally arouse within me. Why would two complete strangers, one of whom resembled the lost Sherry, give me something in such a strange way? What are they trying to accomplish?
                  The answer must be in the package. I tore the wrapping paper apart.


                  IP属地:江苏27楼2013-08-28 18:16
                  回复

                    No.3 疑云四起
                    一个更小的女孩从树林中出现了。
                    可爱的深色卷发,智慧灵动的小脸,还有左腕上缠绕的惊人熟悉的彩虹丝带。
                    “雪莉?”在我意识到自己的错误之前,我已脱口而出。这个女孩的眼睛是褐色,不是像我和我的妹妹那样绿色中带有金色碎点。我朝戴面具的女孩瞥了一眼,她没有任何反应。
                    波蒂亚小步地向我走来,也不像雪莉通常那样步履轻快地跃动。她抬头看着我,突然泪流满面。
                    不知为何,我感到一阵寒意。雪莉只有在饥饿游戏中有人遇害时才会流泪,她才不是爱哭的小孩。波蒂亚也不是,从她被树枝划破的衣服和坚强的身形中我可以判断。到底怎么了?
                    波蒂亚把她一直紧攥着的一个棕色纸包塞进我的手里。然后,在我来得及说话之前,她已转过身向树林跑去。在她从我的视野中消失前,我听到了她的抽泣声。
                    “她还是没有办法面对你。但毕竟……你要记住,那一切不是她的错。”
                    女孩叹气,“记住,不要让你的家人看到这个。如果你相信我们,就在明天这个时候回到这里。”
                    “我不明白。”我小声说。
                    “你会的。”女孩再次微笑,示意我可以离开了。“而且你必须明白。”
                    当我朝着家的方向往回走时,我看到波蒂亚回来了,她把脸埋在女孩的长斗篷里,夕阳在她们身上投下金色的影子。那双盯着我的蓝眼睛出奇地柔和。


                    IP属地:江苏28楼2013-08-28 18:17
                    收起回复
                      哇好棒的文我才发现T_T这里巴黎小霞你好~
                      ————————————————————
                      “为什么你不怕黑?”
                      “因为我爱的人是光啊。”


                      来自Android客户端29楼2013-08-28 19:56
                      收起回复
                        IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端30楼2013-08-28 20:52
                        收起回复
                          人工置顶。。。肿么这么冷清。。。


                          IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端31楼2013-08-29 10:40
                          回复
                            没……看……懂……


                            IP属地:澳大利亚32楼2013-08-29 10:46
                            收起回复
                              对了,无奖大猜猜:包里面有什么?


                              IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端33楼2013-08-29 10:49
                              回复