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1楼2013-05-29 11:03回复

    Screen Play
    PART 1
    [Ext. camera moves start in the start of the road to Mr. Brownlow’s house in
    end of the road.]
    {Morning, bright, less people}
    (Camera Scene Change to next)
    *VC Cover-road sound*
    [Int. Mr. Brownlow’s house Oliver’s Room]
    {Off stage}
    (Camera still on the door of Oliver’s room)
    Oliver:
    Sir, I finish tidy my room!! What do I need to do?
    [Int. Camera moves from Oliver’s room to first floor living room which goes
    down by stairs]
    {On stage}
    (Mr. Brownlow sitting on the sofa and having pipe for rest)
    *Back Ground Music-cracking sound of wood*
    Mr. Brownlow:
    My boy, you did a very good job. Now get down and have some rest.
    [Int. Mr. Brownlow’s house the door of Oliver’s room]
    {Camera goes back by the stairs}
    (Oliver stands beside the door which camera only can see the face)
    Oliver:
    Yes sir, thank you sir!
    [Int. Mr. Brownlow’s house stair]
    {Camera stays at the view}
    (Oliver runs down stair)
    *Foot Step sound*
    Oliver:
    Sir, I’m coming!!
    [Int. Mr. Brownlow’s house living room]
    {Camera stays at the view of beside Mr. Brownlow}
    (Oliver opens the door slowly)
    *Wooden door open sound*
    Mr. Brownlow:
    My Boy, you did a great job. Come and sit beside me.
    [Int. cut to Oliver]
    Oliver:
    Thank you, sir.
    (Oliver walks and sit down at the sofa)
    *Pillow sound*
    [Int. Camera moves form Oliver to Mr. Brownlow]
    (Mr. B rownlow spitting some smoke and say)
    Mr. Brownlow:
    My boy, are you hungry?
    [Int. Camera moves back to the place that can see Mr. Brownlow and Oliver]
    Oliver:
    Yes sir, I’m hungry.
    (Mr. Brownlow stands up from the sofa and say)
    Mr. Brownlow:
    Now, my boy, let’s go for some nice tea!!
    (Olive stands up from the sofa too)
    Oliver:
    Sure sir, good choice sir!
    PART 2
    [Ext. Victorian Road the chariot that Mr. Brownlow and Oliver sit in]
    {Camera follows the chariot which changes
    in middle to Int.}
    (Camera was in front of Oliver)
    [Ext. Victorian Road British Moring shop]
    {Chariot stop in front of the shop, Oliver
    and Mr. Brownlow went out of the Chariot}
    (Camera goes in as Oliver and Mr. Brownlow
    went in and sits down at outside seat.)
    [Int. British Moring Shop]
    Mr. Brownlow has a drink of British morning
    tea and asked to Oliver:
    Oliver my boy, do you remember what did
    Fagin say in the jail?
    Oliver:
    Oh yes sir…He said the treasure was been hiding
    in the ________, let’s go find it!!!
    Mr. Brownlow:
    Sure My, Boy, good idea…..So, let’s go back
    home and ready…
    [Ext. British Moring Shop]
    {Camera stops moving in half}
    (Toby was listen to Oliver and Mr. Brownlow
    talking behind the wall with the evil smile on his face)
    PART 3
    [Ext. Fagin ‘s tant]


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