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自己没事写的一篇小作文,各位大神帮我看看有没有什么错啊

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I will graduate
I'm a senior high school student,but in forteen days,I'm not anymore.I really rejoice that I could make friends with my friends.In the past three years,we always had fun with each other,and I will never forget the time when we play together,because we are friends,forever friends.
I'm really nervious these days,and it is hard for me to fall asleep in the night,because the most important exam in my life is in the just forteen days!I'm worried whether I can go to the college which I have ever wanted,if I fail the exam,I
don't know what should I do then.
I admit that I'm not a good student,because I always read novels in the class and never heard what teachers said.Finally,I did bad with my works,I really regret
that.But I know,however rich I am,I cannot buy back my own past.So I have determined that I will try my best in the last forteen days!I won't let myself disappointed.


1楼2013-05-24 22:20回复
    各位亲们帮忙看看这里有没有什么错误哈,然后说出来我好改,一起学习嘛


    2楼2013-05-24 22:21
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      第一句话显得好啰嗦 有种一个意思非要用好几句话表达的感觉


      来自iPhone客户端8楼2013-05-24 22:51
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