@轻若烟尘 @尘寒幽 @馨宜花开 @RF81 @K芳心终结者 @世纪初的狼
求轻轻温柔地拍。。。我坑坑洼洼地心哟

我替你艾特，看看能不能艾特到，@尘寒幽 @RF81 @K芳心终结者 @世纪初的狼

为啥@不到。。。更桑心了

楼主才高一的话还是不错的了。我从考过六级就很少碰英语，给不出太多意见。楼主多看点文章，多记点惯用语表达会更地道，继续加油。

挺好,现在要多学点高级词汇和专业用语,还有习惯用语,会更好

为什么……看不到……2L被吞了……

、、、LZ的稿子在哪里？？？~~~~

？？？？没稿子。。。。。。

Good morning. It is my honour to stand here to give you a speech again. Now ,I will make a presentation about Roger Federer.
Roger is a famous tennis player who was born on August 8th ,1981. He is good at his backhand. In 2012 Winbledon, he won his 17th Gland slam. At that time, he became the NO.1 for 302weeks. It is the longest record.(这个表达总赶脚怪怪的)
Do you know who is he ? Yes, he is nadal, Roger’s old opponent. It is clear to see the difference between them. Nadal was exited, but Roger played tennis without expression. Maybe someone thinks that he played tennis without ardour . I don’t agree with it. I’d like to use one word to describe him----EFFORTLESS.(以前在某位亲的帖子里看到的，引用了XD) That’s what he make me feel. When he walks on the tennis court, he owns the place. It is all about Roger, but not in an arrogant way. A tennis player Tsonga says when Federer enters the locker room, there is silence. “You feel that the boss has just came in. But that’s not the vibe coming from Roger. He is cool, relaxed and loves teasing us. ”

Good morning. It is my honour to stand here to give you a speech again. Now ,I will make a presentation about Roger Federer.
Roger is a famous tennis player who was born on August 8th ,1981. He is good at his backhand. In 2012 Winbledon, he won his 17th Gland slam. At that time, he became the NO.1 for 302weeks. It is the longest record.(这个表达总赶脚怪怪的)
Do you know who is he ? Yes, he is nadal, Roger’s old opponent. It is clear to see the difference between them. Nadal was exited, but Roger played tennis without expression. Maybe someone thinks that he played tennis without ardour . I don’t agree with it. I’d like to use one word to describe him----EFFORTLESS.(以前在某位亲的帖子里看到的，引用了XD) That’s what he make me feel. When he walks on the tennis court, he owns the place. It is all about Roger, but not in an arrogant way. A tennis player Tsonga says when Federer enters the locker room, there is silence. “You feel that the boss has just came in. But that’s not the vibe coming from Roger. He is cool, relaxed and loves teasing us. ”

In fact, when Roger was young, he was not clam to play tennis. Sometimes he threw down the racket. But he is a kind man. He always write in reply with his sighed photo to the fans who sent him lerrers. He is also hard . You can see the many callus on his hand.Some other players should realize that Federer is out there for the fans even though he is not 100％ physically. Roger once said, ”I always believe if you are struck in a hole and maybe things aren’t going well. You will come out stronger. Everything in lift is this way.” I consider he is right, and that’s what we should learn from him. He is still preserve traces of childishness.[pictures]Let’s see a video to know more about his dispositions.[video]
There will never be another Federer, or anyone else. When he was 12 years old[这个没记清，欢迎指正],he chose to play tennis. And now I should say， how blessed is the sport to have Federer. When you see it before your eyes, you know it is a fact.
This year Roger is 32. Maybe it will be soon for him to say goodbye to his fans and center court. But for those who love Roger, there is no finish line for Roger Federer.
Last but not least, he is a true champion on and off the court, like many other players such as Kobe, Kaka. I believe, with a champion’s heart , he will be forever young !That’s all, thank you for your attention.

高一的话，不评价太多！感觉还不错，加油！！！

什么情况…不过这个演讲稿我真心写不出→ →

…明白是什么情况了 原来lz是高一？我觉得很厉害了高二党自形惭秽！我英语演讲还没有被抽到所以连稿子都没准备怎么写…不过今天很开心语文的课前展示介绍了蜗牛表示反响不错诶 因为听到蛮多人在下面说好帅~哈哈