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镇楼……
六级要来啦~ 贴点自己以前练手的作文,毕竟不是英语专业,框架才是重点……


IP属地:辽宁1楼2012-12-15 12:04回复

    The Traffic Jam
    With the development of scientific technology and productivity, various vehicles have been emerging filling our roads and streets. The traffic jam hit us in
    every day, and we are concerned about the time spending on the way when we must
    commute.

    On one hand, we are rich enough to afford to buy a car or other sorts of the
    vehicles in order to commute conveniently. Averagely one of five families owns
    a private car, and this phenomenon brings harmful effects not only to our
    atmosphere and greenhouse effect but also to our country traffic. On the
    contrary, there are so many autos on the road that the commuting has become
    busier instead of being convenient. On the other hand, a car has been a symbol
    of the wealth, and all of the people are eager to purchase a car, which could
    be regarded as an irresponsible activity to our society but not an individual
    conduct.

    Generally speaking, owning private cars and traffic jam represent our economic advance to some extent, while the issue reveals that there is much space to develop in our country. The authorities concerned should publicize the safe guideline to our drivers avoiding the traffic accidences and acquaint the omnibuses are
    convenient to us and beneficial to our country. Our government should enhance
    the infrastructure which is strong enough to fit our country’s development.


    IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体2楼2012-12-15 12:12
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      2025-06-23 03:26:40
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      The Popularity of Learning Chinese(这篇文,我多少受到了我看过的一篇文的影响)
      The world is undergoing the wave of learning Chinese in recent decades. We were
      engaged in learning foreign languages just several years ago, while the aliens
      are eager to study Chinese as their second tongue currently. I think the
      following reasons could account for the phenomenon.

      Firstly, with the development of the country’s economy and the enhancement of our comprehensive national strength, people on the earth focus on the country more and more. Chinese have become the prevalent language following English, not to
      mention
      the population of china count one third in the total population on the
      earth. Many foreign corporations are willing to invest in china following china
      becoming the fastest growing market in the world. Chinese is widely used
      inevitably, and learning Chinese has been a fashion.

      From my perspective, this phenomenon has many benefits obviously. It is a precious chance that we can introduce our culture and tradition to the world, and
      attract the investment from the rest of the world which is beneficial to the
      advance of our economy and finance. China is so fabulous that Chinese will be
      spoken in every corner of the world in the near future.


      IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体3楼2012-12-15 12:17
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        The popularity of internet games
        Recent decades have witnessed the advancement of the electric technology and the widespread utility of our broadband, while the internet games have found their way into our daily lives. The games are popular especially amid the youngsters. I believe the following seasons contribute to this phenomenon.
        Firstly, the internet belongs to novelties, which could attract the public attention by their essence. What’s more, in this more fiercely competitive society, playing the internet games will help people to lessen pressure somehow, while there are some people indulging themselves into the virtual world in order to avoid the real life. Last but not least, it to some extent offers people the sense of success, and gives them the feeling that everyone could focus on them.
        In my opinion, as the salt of the earth, we should look at this issue sensibly. On one hand, it has some positive effects on lessening our pressure, and understanding new world and information technology. However spending too much time on games or totally abandoning themselves into games could make the persons enjoying the virtual world instead of living in the real life. Particularly the young are the group with less controlling ability on themselves, so the authorities concerned and our parents should educate them make proper use of computers and spend adequate time on internet. Only in this way, can the public especially the youngsters are faced with this phenomenon more sensibly.


        IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体4楼2012-12-15 12:23
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          The Craze of Civil Servant Examination
          The civil servant examination is a method for selecting the persons who will devote their lives and energy to help our national civilian. Recent decades have witnessed the popularity of this kind exam, and it has attached more attention from the public, especially the graduates from all colleges and universities than ever.
          The crazy wave of our civil servant examination generally follows the reasons below. Firstly our educational institutions have enlarged the number of students by almost all schools from the professional cultivating institutions to the universities. More graduates dive into the trend of the civil servant examination. What’s more, the majority of people are willing to contribute to the social development, and regard service for our national citizens as their responsibilities. The civic servant examination can give them the chance being this kind person.
          From my perspective, graduates should shoulder the liability to make contribution to our society, and become the persons who can help our citizens who are in need. The authorities concerned should offer more positions to persons with dedicating spirit. On the other hand being a servant is not the only way for contribution to the society, and everyone has the different choices. As contemporary students, we
          must be sober faced with this trend. Please choose you career carefully, which
          must be based on your personality, interests and will.


          IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体5楼2012-12-15 12:27
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            The Dad End for Doing Good Deeds
            Recent decades have witnessed the ever-decreasing awareness of doing good deeds, especially after publishing some reports about doing good deeds renders the harmful consequence on the kindhearted people. This phenomenon will undermine our traditional virtue gradually, so ourselves and the authorities concerned should take measures to curb the proliferation of this issue.
            On one hand, helping others who are in need is our traditional virtue. However there are some persons taking advantage of human’s compassion for accumulating their own wealth, it is immoral and illegal. As contemporary college student, we can publicize the sense of social responsibility and the morality to my friend and acquaintance as more as possible. Our government should raise the awareness of the traditional virtue, encourage the people who are kind to give hands to the persons in need, and punish the ones who are ungrateful and ask for materials instead of being obliged.
            Generally speaking, all the citizens and our national authority should participate in the campaign for curbing the proliferation of the phenomenon, and keeping our traditional virtues contributes to the development of our society including doing good deeds for no goals and no profits.


            IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体6楼2012-12-15 12:31
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              Studying Overseas(不得不说,这篇也受到了我看过的一篇作文的影响……)
              China is undergoing the trend of studying overseas in recent decade. With the advance of our economy and modernity, let alone our earth being a global village, people have many chances to travel abroad, study overseas and contact with the foreign culture and aliens. It is a wonderful experience to the ones who could go abroad to learn new technology and knowledge.
              Studying overseas has its pluses apparently. Firstly, foreign education institutions have the better academic atmosphere, more systematic education and the better experimental facilities, which is so precious to our students that they are eager to learn and study in foreign countries. Secondly, studying overseas means that you can feel the foreign culture and custom in person, and this experience may broaden your horizons and enhance the capacity of receiving novelties.
              On the other hand, studying overseas may have its own minuses as well. People studying overseas are confronted with the loneliness frequently, which may be overwhelming to these persons in different cultures and customs. People will feel they are peripheral in the society, and it is harmful to their mental and physical health.
              From my perspective, people today look at this issue sensibly. We acknowledge the advantages and disadvantages better than our previous generation. It is just an approach to contact a new world and learn new knowledge. If you ask me, I will say I grab every chance to study overseas but I will never spend consecutive years overseas.


              IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体7楼2012-12-15 12:36
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                Fast Food
                Recent decades have seen the advance of the global economy and the more exchange of our different cultures, and fast food have entered our market and gained the
                public attention
                already.
                Many people favor the fast food as it is prevalent to them, especially amid the youngsters and teenagers.
                As the contemporary individuals, we are eager to pursue novelties and enjoy the
                course of this pursuit. Especially, in this more open-minded world, people
                focus on the exchange of different cultures and custo***et alone the
                popularity of the exotic disks. It is the human instinct to enjoy new
                experiences. On the other hand, fast food is entitled the other name-the junk
                food. It is of too much energy and grease, which is harmful to our physical
                health. Eating too many junk food will lead to the obesity, diabetes and other
                diseases.

                From my perspective, eating fast food occasionally is a wonderful experience to us, while too much frequency is a destructive behavior to our bodies. The
                authorities concerned should publicize
                the importance of the healthy diet and
                balanced diet and direct public to look at the fast food sensibly. Our health
                is the prerequisite to our careers and lives, which is based on the sensibly
                balanced diet.


                IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体8楼2012-12-15 12:38
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                  2025-06-23 03:20:40
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                  Dear Sir or Madam,
                  I bought a computer desk in your online store five days ago, and I accepted it
                  today. I am writing to complain about the low-quality of this commodity.

                  When I opened the pack, I am surprised that some scratch on the joint of the desk. A terrible feeling hit me that it was assembled before. When I saw the
                  marginal seams on the surface, I was greatly angry. Your brand has the public
                  praise,and I am eager to own a thing from your store. This episode frustrated me,however I believe it may be an accident.

                  Accordingto the warranty of the unconditional refund within seven days and the freemaintenance in fifteen days, I want to know if there is a quite new computer
                  desk with the same brand, pattern and prize in your store, and I will to be
                  delighted to own an alternative. However if there is no choice, I want you to
                  repay my fund.

                  Lookforward to your prompt reply. Best wishes.

                  Yours Sincerely,

                  XX


                  IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体9楼2012-12-15 12:41
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                    The Surging Micro-blog(这个是今年6月的那个作文)
                    Nowadays with the advance of internet technology, many novelties have found their ways into our daily lives, which is briefly based on the popularity of the internet, such as online games, blog and micro-blog, etc. it is acknowledged that micro-blog have gain the positive attitude from the majority of people.
                    People hold their own reasons for the popularity of micro-blog. To begin with, the micro-blog to some extent represents the developing degree of our electric appliance. Secondly, people deliver their sentiments and mood on the micro-blog. It will somehow lessen our pressure, which is indispensable to us in our fiercely competitive society, and it is human’s instinct by appealing to others’ attention based on our self-fulfillment. Last not the least, people can gain the information of their acquaintance in time, especially from our family members and intimates.
                    To my opinion, micro-blog is a convenient tool to us for releasing our sensation about all-round aspects in our lives, and we can impart our newly dynamism to our friends whereas mentioning our friends’ situation. on the other hand, micro-blog liking other online tools gain much attention from people, and when you attach too much attention to it, you will lose the family members and friend in your real life.so making proper use of the micro-blog should be vital to us.


                    IP属地:辽宁本楼含有高级字体10楼2012-12-15 12:47
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                      会成为预言帝吗?好期待~


                      IP属地:辽宁11楼2012-12-15 12:50
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                        我快6级了四四……抱着必挂的心态:-(


                        来自手机贴吧12楼2012-12-15 18:53
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                          下周考六级的孩纸来打瓶酱油~


                          IP属地:湖北来自手机贴吧13楼2012-12-15 21:38
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                            月妈妈对我最好啦~


                            IP属地:辽宁来自iPhone客户端14楼2012-12-16 15:56
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                              2025-06-23 03:14:40
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                              瓦还没考四级咧话说我现在连语法都忘光光了


                              IP属地:广东15楼2012-12-16 16:58
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