Application Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of lab technician in the Life Engineering Research Center of Stanford University.
My name is Li Ming, a fresh graduate of the Department of bioengineering, Harbin Institute of Technology (Weihai). Since I majored in bioengineering and love it so much that I want to do more study about it. I always feel excited when doing experiments, for every new step of science is a result of experiments. I always kept a dream of working in the laboratory. I’ve heard that the laboratory of Stanford University is a great laboratory with abundant high-precision experimental apparatus. I’m sure that I will do a good job in the excellent laboratory cooperating with excellent professors, I believe we will have many valuable findings in the laboratory of Stanford University.
Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply. Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know any more about me, please contact me with e-mail.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Enclosure

夫君什么时候有空的话帮我看一眼，有没有语法错误什么的。老师要考到电脑打到投影仪上当堂讲，错误太多的话伤不起啊、、、

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Application Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
　　　I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of lab technician at the Life Engineering Research Center of Stanford University.
　　　My name is Li Ming, a fresh graduate of the Department of bioengineering, Harbin Institute of Technology (Weihai). I have a passion for bioengineering, and pursued it as my major in university. I love the enigmatic quality about science, and especially enjoy conducting experiments, for almost all revolutionary discoveries are discovered in laboratories. It has always been my dream to work in a laboratory. I’ve heard that the laboratory at Stanford University is a great laboratory with abundant high-precision experimental apparatus. I am confident in my ability to excel as a lab technician. I am also looking forward to co-operate with excellent faculty members and fellow colleagues. I believe we will have many valuable findings in the laboratory of Stanford University.
　　　Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply. Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you inquire more information about me, please via e-mail.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Enclosure

老师对改后版的评价:用了很多生词而且运用很自然(出自夫君之手不自然就怪了 嘻~),是她所有班里看过来最好的。满分十分给了最高分9.5,而且还觉得之前给出的那个9.5不够格~
有夫君就是好~抱抱@Inkdrop0617 夫君辛苦了~~~