挑出毛病，时态语法都可以，谢谢啦
To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,humorous appeared in her life.She deeply loved him soon,At any rate,we were lover at that time.my heart was smashed to pieces.,we broke up in the end .Flash by as quickly as a weaver's shuttle.I’ve already gone from a boy .into a man.Some day , When I was waitting for the subway,I glanced at her on the opposite of the platform
At that moment,it called up my bittersweet memory .Although Fixing on each other, we seemed as if we had never seen before.Words couldn’t express my sorrow.just when I wondered wether she was well or not in these years,the subway came.......
Our love ended in light of this,from this time on shape with stranger.
