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To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,humorous appeared in her life.She deeply loved him soon,At any rate,we were lover at that time.my heart was broken.,we broke up at last .Days go by.Ive already gone from a boy .into a man.One day ,I met her again When I was waitting for the subway.At that moment,it called up my memory .Words couldnt express my sorrow.we seemed as if we had never seen before.Our love ended in light of this,from this time on shape with stranger.Finally ,The subway came..since then,weve never met any more.


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