直接来正文了：
Dear everyone！My nane is Lai Jiehui， you can also called me Jeese。This is my English name 。 Before I’m speeching. I have some questions to ask you。 Do you like playing sports？Do you like playing ping-pong？ Do you konw the ping-pong player Zhang Jike？ He is my favorite player .Today ，I will tell something
about him to you。
Listen carefull please！


Zhang Jike was born on Feburary 16 1988.He is a native of Qingdao。He learned to play table tennis with his father when he was five years old. In 2000, he joined the Luneng table tennis team of Shandong Province. He entered the national table tennis team in January, 2003.


Zhang Jike e regarded as Chinese table tennis star of the future.In the 2008 National Tournament[锦标赛], Zhang Jike won the championship for the PLA[中国人民解放军] team with Wang Hao and other players. And then he beat the three Olympic champions[冠军]—Ma Lin, Wang Liqin and Wang Hao, and won the championship of Men’s Singles[男子单打] of table tennis.


Zhang Jike is a crazy man 。On May 15th, 2011, in Rotterdam.He beat Wang Hao by 4:2 in the Men’s Singles of Table Tennis in the World Championship[世锦赛] and won his first championship of Men’s Singles champinship，and then he torn his clothes，so we could see a word“persistence”on his back.

At the first time I met him ，was during the 30th Olympic 。That ningt ， hebecame Table Tennis Men’s Singles championship and then kiss the platform.

Zhang Jike is the fastest Grand Slam winner in the hietory .When asked about his, Zhang Jike remained cool, “I am very happy when I win the championship，and
this is new begining of me。”

That all ，thank you.

我为了写这篇稿子，查了很多语法和科子一些资料。。
当我演讲完时。英语老师总结说其实她也是蝌蚪，她在奥运会时认识科子的，
本身很支持继科的，但也为王皓可惜……

稿子准备得匆忙，如有出错，请蝌蚪们指出，望见谅。

文法有些错 有些地方你需要改一改
例如不是Listen carefull please 而是Listen carefully please
不是you can also called me Jeese 而是you can also call me Jeese
不是 Zhang Jike regarded as Chinese table tennis star of the future
而是Zhang Jike was regarded as Chinese table tennis star of the future

On May 15th, 2011, in Rotterdam.He beat Wang Hao by 4:2 in the Men’s Singles of Table Tennis in the World Championship[世锦赛] and won his first championship of Men’s Singles champinship，and then he torn his clothes，so we could see a word“persistence”on his back.
鹿特丹的时候还没有纹身呢，是巴黎世界杯的时候把衣服脱了才看到纹身的。

亲，很不错的稿，经过一些小改动就完美了。

写的真棒，简单清晰，我收了，也演讲演讲去，用英语讲我科，是非常骄傲的！

谢谢建议！！