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【授权翻译】Homework(慎入,我是来练手的这种事我会说?)

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1L各种废
①lz其实就是个英语废,翻译这文章就是练英语的
②lz文笔不好,翻译不好的地方还请各位看官见谅【我辜负了原作者的好文笔
③原文一章内容较多,所以有时翻译可能会分两部分或者更多
④哪位文笔好的妹纸对润笔有兴趣的可以联系我
⑤这个故事就是关于百岁老妖怪诱拐10岁萌妹纸的故事(口胡)
如果阅读了以上内容还对此文章有兴趣的,请移驾3L



IP属地:四川1楼2012-07-06 12:47回复

    Homework/家庭作业
    作者:chOOnyOung17
    翻译:樱落人散(虽然很渣)
    配对:Ichi/Ruki
    分级:M(即16+)
    发表:11/06/09
    状态:连载
    类型:浪漫/超自然
    警告:可能包含成人语言,主题和建议、以及对sex和暴力的详细描写
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    IP属地:四川2楼2012-07-06 12:48
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      展示在他眼前的,是他从未见过的最美丽的深紫色珠宝。心脏开始疯狂跳动,身体也在颤抖,全身的细胞似乎都在沸腾。
      他的目光变得灼热,最原始的欲望突然席卷全身…白色的尖牙猛然增长,理智也随之消散
      可能…她真的…他最终…(原句:Could
      it be... Is she really... Did he finally...)
      当这个小女孩距他只有几英尺时,他的喉咙发出一声低吼。她天真地盯着他,双眼闪闪发亮,自她内心深处散发的清新抚慰着他的每一根神经,他变得更加狂野、欲望也越发强烈
      她的血…是如此的鲜美炽热。醉人的香气几乎使他疯狂,他无法再控制自己。他张开嘴,锐利的牙齿显露无疑,婴儿稚嫩的肉体是它的目标,但…
      他向下看去,银制的器具正抵在他的腹部
      “放开我女儿!”孩子的父亲阴冷地说道,手上的剑深入男人的肉中。但伤口似乎对这陌生人没有丝毫影响。他只是发出一声咆哮就将白哉推开,白哉的身体狠狠撞在了两米外的一棵树上
      “白哉大人!”绯真焦急地跑向她的丈夫
      男人轻松地将剑拔出体外。把剑扔掉之后,他伸直了手臂将孩子举起。一轮满月在天际悄悄浮现,暗淡的光芒透过厚厚的云层投向大地,包裹男人与手中的孩子
      这对年轻的父母都可以从所处之处看到男人那长长的獠牙、血红的双眼以及狂野的欲望。男人张嘴时,白哉和绯真尖叫着、却无能为力
      “不要!!!!!!!!”
      一时间电闪雷鸣、大雨倾盆,狂风呼啸,他们被震耳欲聋的隆隆声包围。就好像世界末日最终来临,净化了一切美好事物并将它们送入天堂,将一切丑恶推入地狱并且焚烧殆尽
      他们颤抖着,抬头一看,男人正走向他们。
      “给你。”男人说道,他小心翼翼地将孩子还给她的母亲。绯真接过孩子,将她紧紧护在怀里。她忙不迭地检查宝宝的身体,宝宝左胸口上一道深深的咬印让绯真瞪大了眼(原句She quickly checks on her baby and her
      eyes widen as what she see. There, on her baby's left chest, a deep bite mark wounds
      the child's flesh:)。但奇怪的是…伤口并未向外渗血。她又赶忙探了探宝宝的呼吸,还好,她只是睡着了,宝宝还活着。绯真稍微安下心来,呼吸稍稍紊乱。
      “别担心。她还活着。”陌生人说
      “你对我女儿做了什么?”白哉问道。拜这个野蛮的男孩儿所赐,他的肋骨断了几根,剧烈的疼痛让他只能蹲在地上。
      “我只是娶了你的女儿。”
      又是一记闷雷炸开
      “你…”
      “你的女儿…她是我命中注定的另一半。她胸口的印记会深入心脏,而我给予了她这个印记,所以她现在是我的人了。”
      “你疯了吗?我女儿只有一岁大,她…”
      “照顾好她,”陌生人说,对白哉的抗议恍若未闻,“10年后我会来带走她的。”
      “No!You will not have my daughter!”白哉坚决地说
      男人背对着他们得意一笑。
      “你不会那样做的。不管你愿不愿意你都给把她给我。”腰部传来的疼痛让他话语一顿。他捂着流血的伤口继续说道:“我咬你女儿的时候,在她的血液里注入了一种特殊的毒液。毒液会在十年后发作,到时只有我能解毒。所以你们想要藏起来或者从我身边逃走是不可能的。”
      “你这杂、种!”白哉挣扎着想要起身,但却无力地跌回原地
      “白哉大人!”绯真扶着她的丈夫。她低声啜泣着却试着让情况冷静下来,“如果你不回来,那我女儿就会死吗?”她轻声问道。尽管发生在她唯一的女儿身上的一切让她难以接受,但她仍然温和优雅
      男人转身按住母亲的肩膀。不知怎的,他的神色也变的柔和。
      “不论发生什么,我都会为她回来。我以灵魂起誓。”
      


      IP属地:四川4楼2012-07-06 12:50
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        :The heavy rain pounds harshly and rapidly on her skin. The droplets almost digging on the now muddy soil where her dainty feet are planted. Her heart seems to beat with the rhythm of the rain...loud, erratic and almost painful as she stares shock at the scene before them.
        "Step back." the tall dark haired man says, lifting a protective arm in front of
        her, hiding her in his back. With her eyes still wide and her body trembling
        either because of the cold rain or because of fear she's not sure, she just
        nods and tightens her hold around the baby in her arms. "Who are
        you?" her husband asks the man standing a few feet away from them. His
        eyes glowing blood red amidst the blinding darkness around of the forest. And
        as a roar of thunder and lightning fall upon them, Hisana can't help but shiver
        at the sight of an incredibly large wolf lying dead beneath the man's feet.
        "I'm
        asking who are you, boy?" Byakuya asks again as the man didn't reply.
        "Why is
        it really necessary to know the name of the one who saved you? And don't call
        me boy cause I'm way much older than you." the guy who claims to be their
        savior jumps off from the wild beast's dead body and slowly walks towards them.
        "Don't
        come any closer." Byakuya says in a cold yet very threatening tone. A few
        minutes earlier they were about to be eaten by a wild beast which appear to be
        a wolf but this guy suddenly appeared from nowhere and took down the incredibly
        horrifying and much stronger wolf. But even if the said man saves them, Byakuya
        still can put his trust on the strange boy...let alone let his guard down and
        risk his wife and daughter's life. "I said don't come any closer!"
        "Che.
        You have the habit of repeating yourself, don't you?"
        "Because
        you're not listening the first time." Byakuya retorts. "Now, I know
        you saved our life and I'm thankful for that. But will you please leave
        us?"
        "Hm...not
        until I have a reasonable payment for saving your life." the stranger
        says.
        Byakuya felt
        a slight relief but his eyes remains narrowed at the man. He slips a hand inside
        his coat's pocket and throws a small sack towards the man. "There. It
        should be enough payment. Now go and leave."
        Pulling one
        hand out of his pocket, the young man crouches down and picks the string
        attached to the sack, lifting it up from the muddy ground. "What is
        this?"
        "Money,
        what else." Byakuya answers haughtily and then...
        His eyes
        narrow in annoyance as the young man starts laughing hysterically. He is
        laughing so hard that it's more irritating than the consistent raindrops
        digging in his skin.
        "What so
        funny? Isn't it enough..? Here, take another o-"
        "Didn't
        you hear what I said?" the young man cuts him off. His laughter dies
        instantly and is replace by a serious tone. "I said I need a 'reasonable'
        payment. I'm not talking about this shit." he tosses
        


        IP属地:四川6楼2012-07-06 12:55
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          the bag back at the dark haired man and look past him. "Is that your
          wife?" he asks and Byakuya glares daggers at him.
          "Don't
          you dare lay a finger on my wife and my daughter or I'll kill you."
          The young man
          smirks, "Haven't you heard of the saying, an eye for an eye...a tooth for
          a tooth?" Byakuya's eyes narrow and he pulls his wife further behind him.
          "It means when you take someone's life you have to pay for it with your
          own life. But in our case... I...saved you and thus giving you another chance at
          life so that means..." his eyes start to glow blood red again as he says,
          "I'm taking someone's life as a reward."
          A loud
          thunder erupts with a shocking lightning ripping the dark sky and making
          Hisana's body to jump in fear and horror. She felt a woosh of air in front her
          so she instinctively tightens her hold on her baby's body but then...
          "Byakuya!
          Our baby!" Hisana shrieks in horror and Byakuya's stoic face finally turns
          horrified as he sees his little daughter in the hands of the dangerous
          stranger. How did he do that, the couple doesn't have any idea. They knew that
          the guy is far from being a normal human since he's able to kill a beast with
          his bare hands but how did he…
          "Give my
          daughter back, you insolent-"
          "Ah ah
          ah! Don't say bad words. The baby can hear you, right little one?" the
          young man says, cooing a crying baby in his arms. "Ssh...Don't cry. I
          won't hurt you, don't cry." he holds the baby in both sides and lifts her
          to level with his eyes. But as he is about to cooed her, the baby suddenly
          stops crying and opens her eyes...revealing the most beautiful deep purple
          jewel that he had ever seen in his life. He felt his heart beats frantically,
          his body shivering, a bubbling stirring in his cells. His eyes glow and he
          suddenly felt animalistic...white sharp fangs start growing so suddenly and he
          starts to lose his mind.
          Could it be... Is she really... Did he finally...
          A low
          growling comes out from his throat as he inches the baby girl closer to his
          face. It's eyes staring innocently into his glowing ones and it makes him
          become wilder as her fresh scent soothes deep inside every nerve of his body
          and making him more animalistic.
          Her
          blood...it's so fresh and hot.. The smell is so intoxicating and driving him
          mad He can't control himself anymore. He opens his mouth, revealing those sharp
          fangs and is about to attack the baby's young flesh but then...
          He looks down
          and sees a silver steel being thrusts upon his abdomen.
          "Let go
          of my daughter." The father of the incredible child says darkly, planting
          his sword deeper in to the man's flesh. But the cut didn't affect the stranger
          even a bit. He just let out an animalistic growl and pushes Byakuya away,
          sending the man a good two meters away before his body hits a tree.
          "Byakuya!"
          Hisana rushes to her husband.
          


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            The stranger
            then pulls the sword out of his body effortlessly and tosses it away. He then
            lifts the baby up in ar***ength. The full moon emerges through the thick
            clouds and casts its dim ligh…forming the sillohuette of the man with a baby in
            his hands.
            Both parents
            can seem to move from their spot as they see the long fangs, the bloody red
            eyes and the animalistic desire on the stranger's face. And as the man opens
            his mouth, Byakuya and Hisana can't do anything but...scream.
            "NOOOOOOOOOOO!"
            Thunders,
            lightning and a tremendous downpour boom around them. The wind blows violently.
            It's like dooms day is finally here to purify the good and send them to heaven
            and punish the bad and burn them in hell.
            Trembling,
            Hisana and Byakuya look up as the stranger walks towards them.
            "Here." the man says, carefully handing the child back to her mother.
            Hisana reaches up and cradles her daughter on her arms
            protectively. She quickly checks on her baby and her eyes widen as what she
            see. There, on her baby's left chest, a deep bite mark wounds
            the child's flesh. But what's confusing is...there is no blood
            coming out of the wound. She checks on her child's breathing and lets out a
            shaky and relieve breath as she realizes that her baby is alive and just fell
            asleep.
            "Don't
            worry, she's alive." the stranger says.
            "What
            did you do to my daughter?" Byakuya asks, still
            crouching on the ground because of a slightly broken rib courtesy of the
            inhuman boy.
            "I just
            marry your daughter."
            Another
            thunder claps errupt.
            "What do
            you-"
            "Your
            daughter...she's my destined mate. The mark on her chest goes deep inside her
            heart. I've put that mark on her so she's mine now."
            "Are you
            out of your mind? My daughter is just one year old. She's-"
            "Take
            care of her." the stranger says, ignoring Byakuya's protests. "I'll
            come back to take her with me after 10 years."
            "No! You
            will not have my daughter." Byakuya says firmly.
            The stranger
            smirks and turns his back on them. "You can't do that. You'll give her to
            me whether you like it or not." he pauses as he starts to feel the pain of
            his wound in his abdomen. He holds on to that open and
            bloody wound as he continues, "When I bit your daughter, I put special
            venom on her blood. The venom will last up to ten years and
            only I can sip that venom out. So hiding and running away from me is
            impossible."
            "You
            bastard!" Byakuya tries to stand up but he fumbles back down on the mud.
            "Byakuya!" Hisana reaches up and cradles her husband, sobbing
            silently and trying to take the situation as calm as she can. "If you
            didn't come back, then my daughter will die?" she asks softly. Though the
            situation of her only daughter is very hard for her to accept, Hisana is still
            gentle and nice.
            The stranger turns at the mother over his shoulder. Somehow, his
            


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              expression becomes soft and gentle too. "I'll come back for her, no matter
              what...I swear to my soul."
              Hisana gasps
              deeply but then a long and calm sigh escapes her lips and she's able to give
              the stranger a small smile. "Alright. We will wait for you."
              "Hisana-"
              Byakuya protested, but his wife pats him and smile, meaning that it has been
              decided. Byakuya's jaw sets firmly and he lets out a controlled sigh. Then the couple turns
              as the stranger starts to leave. "Wait!" Byakuya calls out
              and the stranger turns at them. "However insolent and
              arrogant you are, I still wants to say... Thank you for saving us,
              boy."
              "It's
              not boy." the stranger leaps up to a tall tree. Turning over his shoulder,
              he looks at the baby's sleeping form and smirks. "It's... Kurosaki,
              Ichigo."
              ...V...
              HOMEWORK
              by
              chOOnyOunG17
              I don't own
              Bleach
              ...V...
              14 years
              later...
              THWAK!
              "Ouch!"
              a fifteen year old girl yelps as a dusty eraser bar
              connects on her forehead. She hisses and rubs the abuse spot before turning
              angrily at the person standing in front of their classroo***eeping
              in my class again... Kuchiki Rukia?"
              She sticks
              her chin up and crosses her arms in front of her
              chest. "No, I'm not."
              "Yes,
              you are."
              "Am
              not."
              "Are
              too."
              "Am
              not!"
              "Are
              too!"
              Every heads
              in the room are turning back and forth and back and forth as another
              teacher-student bout interrupts their class discussion.
              "Am
              not!"
              "Are
              too!"
              "Am...
              Fine! I a***eeping! But that's because your class is so boring!"
              Loud gasps
              escape the students mouth as they stares at the petite girl...shock at what she
              just said. with a scolw on his face, the teacher scolw
              and simply points a finger at the door. "In the corridor... Now."
              Groaning
              loudly, Rukia shoots her teacher a deadly glare before stomping towards the
              door. She will be standing at the corridor...again.
              'Yeah, that's
              what you get for being honest, Kuchiki.' She closes the door behind her and
              leans at the wall next to it.
              'Life's
              sucks. Why would knowing the squareroot of a certain shit be of any
              importance anyway when all I have to do is give a yen when buying a dumpling? If ever the dumpling man told that a piece of dumpling costs
              a squareroot of the derivative of the limit of x as x goes to infinity... I swear I'm gonna kill him and stick him to death!'
              Sigh.
              She pushes herself
              off the wall and walks towards the window. She slides open one window, lean down the sill and looks up at the sky.
              'Hmm...The sky is clear today so I think it's going to rain.' she chuckles. 'Why
              did I say that? Because that's the way life is...ironic.'
              She stretches her arms and takes in a deep breath.
              'Oh by the
              way, my name is Kuchiki Rukia. I'm 15 years old, a high school student...and
              married.'
              She
              places her elbow on the window sill and prompts her chin on his palm as she
              continues to stare at the cloudless sky.
              'Yes, I'm a
              wife now. I was married when I was just 10. Ha! How was
              that for early marriage... Anyways, my mother told me that it's a Kuchiki
              tradition so I don't argue with that anymore. And besides I grew up having a weird life...a weird
              family...and an even weird husband. Yeah, he sucks! And he's a
              vampire... Yes, a V-A-M-PIRE. I told you I have the
              weirdest life in the whole world. But the real reason why he sucks is
              because... My vampire husband also happens to be...'
              y homeroom teacher.'
              She smirks.
              'My real name
              is Kurosaki Rukia...and welcome to my world.'
              排版有问题...


              IP属地:四川9楼2012-07-06 12:55
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                收工,走人


                IP属地:四川10楼2012-07-06 12:56
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                  2025-06-24 03:03:20
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                  这篇我看过= =
                  原文很长呢,楼主加油


                  11楼2012-07-06 13:05
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                    不错哦、、、继续继续、、、


                    来自手机贴吧12楼2012-07-06 13:24
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                      我觉得很不错啊。。表示支持~!!!


                      13楼2012-07-06 13:36
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                        哇塞,楼主你很强的说啊,这哪是英语废啊


                        IP属地:北京14楼2012-07-06 13:46
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                          I'm a English ldiot ,so I can't understand what you write~~


                          IP属地:山东15楼2012-07-06 13:50
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                            M 是mature=18n ?!


                            16楼2012-07-06 13:50
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                              2025-06-24 02:57:20
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                              加油,楼主,翻得很不错,加油啊


                              IP属地:浙江17楼2012-07-06 14:53
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