哇..英文啊..我喜欢啊..有少少errors..但很好啊..例如become bound up 我是第一次见..但check 过好似对的..但点解用past tense ..有些用present tense较好啊..they are well-know with ..是跟(with)好像不是啊..如果是我..我会delete 左<with a ot of people>..呵呵..whenthey were made up the rock band ..用passive voice我不肯定啊..不过很好啊..
