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【开开心心】我刚刚原创了一个给神经病的情书。英文的。求检查。

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非常简单。
I really do want to talk with you .though there exist a lot already.and I am not a special one in you mind.although you come to talk with me when you it is boring . But I am really happy when you come to me. You do not have to be understand but I just want to make you feel that!


IP属地:北京1楼2011-11-16 19:47回复
    第一句应该是 i do really want 打反了


    IP属地:日本2楼2011-11-16 19:51
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      I do really want to talk with you .Despite that been already have for a long time and I know I am not a special one in you mind.Whatever you come to talk with me when you are boring or something else. But I am still happy when you in timed with me. You do not have to understand that what i am think,but I just want to make you feel that!
      这样会不会比较好点 LZ继续改错><


      IP属地:日本3楼2011-11-16 19:57
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        呜呜,我发出去了T^T 错误版本


        IP属地:北京来自掌上百度4楼2011-11-16 19:58
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          = = 囧 没事 应该读得懂


          IP属地:日本5楼2011-11-16 20:03
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            lol, good letter


            IP属地:浙江6楼2011-11-16 20:21
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              私は本当に君と相谈したい。私が君にとってそんなに特别な人じゃないと、いつもそう思う。でも君が私に喋って时、私はいつも嬉しかった。君が私の気持ちを良くわかるというつもりじゃないが、ただこの気持ちを感じるも良かった。
              哈哈 也不知道对不对 大致翻了一下


              来自iPhone客户端7楼2011-11-17 13:54
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                妈呀 我已经看到错了 真囧


                来自iPhone客户端8楼2011-11-17 13:54
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                  我去。。。谁来个西班牙语版


                  IP属地:北京来自掌上百度9楼2011-11-17 13:59
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                    谁在西班牙0 0


                    IP属地:日本10楼2011-11-17 19:26
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                      in your mind
                      want sb to do sth
                      Whatever you come to talk with me when you are boring or something else
                      这句Whatever you come to talk with me 是主语从句
                      when you are boring or something else是时间状语从句。。。
                      谓语呢= =?
                      


                      IP属地:上海11楼2011-11-17 19:36
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                        我觉得后面when you are boring到最后貌似都不对劲- -
                        整句话都怪怪的- -


                        IP属地:日本12楼2011-11-17 19:44
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                          确实。。。
                          You do not have to understand that what i am think,but I just want to make you feel that!
                          that没必要加的,逗号应该改分号,逗号不能分割2个完整的句子的。。。。


                          IP属地:上海13楼2011-11-17 19:46
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                            我也不知道- - 我一点不会标点>< 每次都是空格。。


                            IP属地:日本14楼2011-11-17 19:48
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                              哈哈,我们老师教过我们一个专门写作的方法
                              先写一个简单句,就主谓宾,然后开始扩句
                              最后变成(主语的主语)+主语+谓语+谓语的状语+宾语的宾语+宾语+宾语补足语+状语(时间,地点,原因,方式,让步)


                              IP属地:上海15楼2011-11-17 19:53
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