http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62628 《囚鸟》(第一部) BY:Atheana
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62629 囚鸟》(第二部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62630 囚鸟》(第三部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62754 囚鸟》(第四部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62755 《囚鸟》(第五部)
还有初稿的,出书的时候用了初稿,共四本,各位可以比较一下,各有千秋.
有人认为心理描写初稿的好,情节是复稿.互补中~~~
http://bbs18.xilu.com/CGI/viewbbs/drefine/936.html
囚鸟 番外 报复 by Atheana(睿嘉)
http://www.xiaoyaojing.com/wind/read.php?tid=25251
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62629 囚鸟》(第二部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62630 囚鸟》(第三部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62754 囚鸟》(第四部)
http://bbs13.xilu.com/cgi-bin/bbs/view?forum=danmeiyuan&message=62755 《囚鸟》(第五部)
还有初稿的,出书的时候用了初稿,共四本,各位可以比较一下,各有千秋.
有人认为心理描写初稿的好,情节是复稿.互补中~~~
http://bbs18.xilu.com/CGI/viewbbs/drefine/936.html
囚鸟 番外 报复 by Atheana(睿嘉)
http://www.xiaoyaojing.com/wind/read.php?tid=25251