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应技术歪楼党的提醒,补充以下sil中全部/部分删除段落
狒狒直接无视蛮多丝的审问
… Great must be the power and will of any who would lie to Mandos, or even refuse his questioning. But Fëanor had no thought of it. He was so besotted with the lies of Melkor that had taken root in his proud heart (though he did not yet clearly perceive their source) that he judged himself justified in all points, and other judgement he scorned.
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这里可以得出以下几点抽风结论:
1 面瘫神的提问是可以refuse的
2 能refuse或者当着烦啦的面撒谎的精灵,需要很强的精神力和意志力
3 狒狒拥有这种能力,但是他自己很可能没有清楚地意识到自己的这种能力
4 费诺里安不可说服(wtf)
以下,这部戏进展为三代家庭感情剧,炸
这里是虫子说的内胆尼尔删除Scene =w=
With him went his sons, and Finwe his father, who would not be parted from him, in fault or guiltless, and some others also of the Noldor. But Nerdanel would not go with him, and she asked leave to abide with Indis, whom she had ever esteemed, though this had been little to the liking of Feanor. Northward in Valinor, in the hills near to the halls of Mandos, Feanor and his sons made a strong place and a treasury at Formenos, and they laid in hoard a multitude of gems, and weapons also: they did not put aside the swords that Feanor had made.
费诺里安建造Formenos
蛮伪大王的信使
(PS:软体,我发现你文的剧情和逻辑也完全吻合=w=)
Therefore he sent a messenger to Formenos, saying: Fëanor son of Finwë, come and do not deny my bidding! In my love thou remainest and wilt be honoured in my hall.'
语气各种NB的发型45度向上的飞机信使
“圈圈圈烦啦顶个球”:按狒狒的脾气肯定给人下马威
(然后来了天才的给捞粉兜儿(wtf我穿越了开了蹦了)下面欢迎回到人流现场)
HoME X,LQ
大王死的全过程,叙述者长公主白菜美人(Maidros的地方我改成Maedhros了,便于理解)
[A段]But even as she mourned, there was heard the sound of feet hastening in the night. Then through the throng came the sons of Feanor, flying from the North, and they bore new tidings of evil. Maedhros spoke for them. 'Blood and darkness!' he cried. 'Finwe the king is slain, and the Silmarils are gone!' Then Feanor fell upon his face and lay as one dead, until the full tale was told.
'My lord,' said Maedhros to Manwe, 'it was the day of festival, but the king was heavy with grief at the departure of my father, a foreboding was on him. He would not go from the house. We were irked by the idleness and silence of the day, and we went riding towards the Green Hills. Our faces were northward, but suddenly we were aware that all was growing dim. The Light was failing. In dread we turned and rode back in haste, seeing great shadows rise up before us. But even as we drew near to Formenos the darkness came upon us; and in the midst was a blackness like a cloud that enveloped the house of Feanor.
'We heard the sound of great blows struck. Out of the cloud we saw a sudden flame of fire. And then there was one piercing cry. But when we urged on our horses they reared and cast us to the ground, and they fled away wild. We lay upon our faces without strength; for suddenly the cloud came on, and for a while we were blind. But it passed us by and moved away north at great speed. Melkor was there, we do not doubt. But not he alone! Some other power was with him, some huge evil: even as it passed it robbed us of all wit and will.
'Darkness and blood! When we could move again we came to the house. There we found the king slain at the door. His head was crushed as with a great mace of iron. We found no others: all had fled, and he had stood alone, defiant. That is plain; for his sword lay beside him, twisted and untempered as if by lightning-stroke. All the house was broken and ravaged. Naught is left. The treasuries are empty. The chamber of iron is torn apart. The Silmarils are taken!'
And after Fëanor cursing Melkor and he fled into the night,
[B段]After him Maedros and his brethren went in haste, dismayed, for they had not known that he was present when Maedros spoke; and now they feared that he might slay himself. All those who saw Fëanor's anguish grieved for him and forgave all his bitterness.
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洗白段落必须的啊!爷爷死掉七个王子下落不明是要闹怎样啊
[A段]可看出
1。白菜公主叙述能力很强
2。内心比起他爸来说更镇定
3。这里公主第一次被蘑菇丝远程攻击推倒在地:所以,公主没有前面说的,那种抵抗烦啦的能力
4。出了大事,公主第一个想到的是带着弟弟去找烦啦,这是和狒狒完全不同的思考回路
-〉年轻的白菜这时确实信仰烦啦的
[B段]可看出
1 两代的父子情深(可以为之死去的爱)
2 白菜这段叙述完成,都不知道狒狒在场
得出:那时年轻的白菜公主很可能是私下和烦啦神交,而狒狒并不知道,或者说并不关心。
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32楼2011-08-13 16:55
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    ==和平时期的夫妻驻地对比===
    以下可以看作庆哥大王和露姐的Lord二粉和小熊(所以Turgon都有Nevrast,而大王子fingon就留在了家中,这都是因为老托一直在对应BL那对!太明显了!)
    作者是这么说的:
    Fingolfin was held overlord of all the Noldor, and Fingon after him, though their own realm was but the northern land of Hithlum; yet their people were the most hardy and valiant, most feared by the Orcs and most hated by Morgoth.
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    各种高贵有木有!
    The chief citadel of Maedhros was upon the Hill of Himring, the Ever-cold; and that was wide-shouldered, bare of trees, and flat upon its summit, surrounded by many lesser hills.
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    各种冷艳有木有!
    于是loli心的LZ最喜欢的高贵冷艳就是全Arda最和谐的CP有木有!
    (你滚


    34楼2011-08-13 17:24
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      觉得Nerdanel那个还好…因为说了七个儿子有去……就感觉其它人没去一样………倒是觉得删"其它NOLDOR"不好……费家大旗下难道没人了么!!=皿=
      那段白菜好美>< 果真是长王子风范TAT 说他信Valar么………那么最后那段岂不是更虐………
      ps Then Feanor fell upon his face and lay as one dead是……瘫了?好可爱的狒狒!!!!ps又看到FF了(自飞
      ps 觉得倒不妨碍费家黑……自家和别人家毕竟是不一样的么……黑黑也挺有意思的………虽然自己是把在Valinor那段从来都脑补成FF感情戏……大家都不黑……(自飞
      要说有什么该黑的,就是Valar = =


      来自掌上百度35楼2011-08-13 17:36
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        插入章,关于又一个情敌
        小熊你要知道美丽的白菜公主对你的爱是多么坚定
        看官知道Hithlum交权时期,阿旮旯头是绝对讨厌费诺里安的(因为猫里少爷的那段话)
        然而,啊旮旯头的大哥粉耷拉头是怎么做的:
        PS: 此君长得唇红齿白,又称好口牙,又称粉肉的!,又称No More the Voise(读作Nom the Wise)又称greatest Wander-King always with a realm and people behind him
        同人男作者是这么写这位情敌大王的失败的:
        Finrod Felagund lord of Nargothrond journeyed east of Sirion and went hunting with Maglor and Maedhros, sons of Fëanor. But he wearied of the chase
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        拜托啊!粉肉的大王!白菜名花有主!Maglor HoMe里说他是已婚男啊!
        你到底Hunt谁啊,于是你weary of the chase了啊
        后文,这位受到打击的家伙跑到人类的聚居地夜半歌声
        Then he went among the sleeping people, and sat beside their dying fire where none kept watch; and he took up a rude harp which Bëor had laid aside, and he played music upon it such as the ears of Men had not heard
        故意等人家睡着了再唱,大哥你有没有公德啊
        这直接证明了他失恋了,而且对他的神经影响很大。
        这里也说明了悲催的粉肉的确实有努力学习唱歌,是不是因为听说了小熊唱歌救白菜的事迹而开始学习的呢
        这个就留给大家想象了
        


        36楼2011-08-13 17:41
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          回复37楼:
          +1
          对了,觉得白菜说那段话比起整个宝钻一言不发猛打仗的烧饼英雄明显受了!!!


          来自掌上百度38楼2011-08-13 17:52
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            这段好欢乐~~~~高贵冷艳哈哈哈哈


            40楼2011-08-13 19:10
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              greatest Wander-King always with a realm and people behind him
              太欢乐了
              小星星大王请继续八XDDD
              大哥真受欢迎~


              41楼2011-08-13 19:23
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                Quanta SMaerillion~~~~必须的~~~~w


                42楼2011-08-13 19:25
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                  这两只高贵冷艳的纯朴孩子太可爱了
                  >>>>>蘑菇丝啊!你行不行啊!你knew of the vigilance of Maedhros,于是就去打他的老公岳父!
                  看得我满地打滚


                  43楼2011-08-13 19:50
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                    木有小JJ的蘑菇丝JJ,拆CP辛苦了,向你致以最崇高的BS
                    PS:白菜讲话的几段,多有爱!
                    Blood and darkness! Darkness and blood!
                    长王子的气势淋漓尽致,来个Noldo路人甲怎么可能体现出来
                    第一次看就很想扑倒然后狠狠安慰之,于是狒狒就扑地了(喂喂Atar你扑错方向了……
                    还有在Hithlum说灰老头的那段:A king is he that can hold his own, or else his title is vain.
                    看得我虎躯一震风中凌乱如魔似幻高贵冷艳的萌了他
                    


                    44楼2011-08-13 20:07
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                      觉得高贵冷艳形容说灰老头那段很合适嘛XD
                      桃子的表情用得我荡漾了!打滚><


                      来自掌上百度45楼2011-08-13 20:15
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                        桃子你的表情太WS了= =……


                        IP属地:北京46楼2011-08-13 20:19
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                          这个是不是读作 '全都SM梅王子'
                          卡活动文卡到我这几天每天晚上都去求助那我仅有的几本HoMe,发现第10册我没入……
                          LZ大王请继续


                          48楼2011-08-14 18:32
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                            联系上下文,我们知道这战马是白菜送给小熊老爸的……这马自然要回的是小熊怀里。
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                            太XE了!大王GJ!
                            


                            52楼2011-08-22 18:48
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                              ====插入段,我阿塔(你滚)、那个,小熊和本大王(滚)的纠结=====
                              1 按顺序,首先HoMe12,这个处[哦][啊]女守卫者突然无性繁殖了两个小孩, Ernis and Finbor。
                              (Finbor这名字槽点太多,大家看到只要微笑就好了)
                              In all the tables [Findecáno] is marked as having a wife, though she is not named; in the first, two children are named, Ernis and Finbor, Ernis subsequently becoming Erien
                              这个想法舍弃了。
                              2 其次发表版Silm:
                              his young son Ereinion (who was after named Gil-galad) he sent to the Havens.
                              本大王依然是无性繁殖的。
                              3 再次HoMe12
                              but in the final table they were struck out, with the note that Fingon 'had no child or wife
                              证明2的Sil版也是被舍弃的,因为作者同人男在最后关头依然要维护自己的王道。
                              小托也不得不认栽了。
                              ===〉Orodreth(Son of Angrod)是小星星和Finduilas的爸这个想法是作者的最终版本
                              当然最终与否,并不影响任何同人的自由发挥,因为Idea之所以成为Idea,就因为所有的idea都插着自由的翅膀(你滚啊
                              


                              53楼2011-08-22 18:57
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