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来自手机贴吧215楼2011-10-09 14:38
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    O(∩_∩)O谢谢【我文笔太差的说,怕会毁人物


    216楼2011-10-09 20:58
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      Zeito...很可怜啊...(画十字,默哀)不过很好看,也绝对符合杂音的形象,继续期待下文


      IP属地:广东217楼2011-10-11 10:33
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        自持lz


        IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧218楼2011-10-12 22:07
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          断章
          一个昏暗的实验室里。
          试验台正发出暗淡的光芒。
          一阵狂妄的笑声突然从停止发光的试验台那里传来。
          “很好……”
          “太好了!”
          一扇大门突然敞开。
          在门的背后
          是冰冷的视线。
          “哼哼哼……很好……我亲爱的女儿们……”
          “你们下一个目标是……”
          “杂音未来。”
          


          IP属地:加拿大219楼2011-10-15 05:07
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            后面就是真正的剧情了把?更加期待了


            IP属地:广东220楼2011-10-15 12:31
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              无笑,我没写过番外啊……我一直在写剧情啊……(= =)


              IP属地:加拿大221楼2011-10-17 04:29
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                期待文


                222楼2011-10-17 19:09
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                  最近都不像写剧情把...像铺垫下面的剧情,所以才这样说...抱歉呢...


                  IP属地:广东223楼2011-10-18 09:58
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                    很好,本女王亲临……


                    IP属地:加拿大224楼2011-10-23 17:48
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                      笑了一会...有点意外...你居然会写这些(附:初音为什么是天然+百合?)


                      IP属地:广东226楼2011-10-25 10:27
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                        这就是脑子抽住的下场


                        IP属地:加拿大227楼2011-10-26 03:28
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                          第八章 噩梦
                          <好烦啊……>‘得了,你找我什么事情啊……’本应在睡梦中的我被另一个“我”拖到心之界的地方。望着都浮在半空中的黑红方块,我叹口气,无奈。
                          <干嘛这么冷淡呢,唔啊啊……好烦哦,总觉得有什么事情要发生一样>黑初音【省略了,不好意思】懒散的眼神中又掺杂着丝丝烦躁。
                          ‘喂喂,别用这种无聊的理由打扰我的睡眠’<我的预感从来没错过好么!>‘唔?那你说下你的预感’
                          她不说话,捧出一个光团,放在我脖子上的镶有蓝色宝石的音符上。
                          <总感觉你会受伤,这样的话,可以让你快速止血了>
                          咚。
                          <痛!干嘛打我!>‘谁叫你要乌鸦嘴的。’<唔唔唔……可恶啦!>‘好啦,我回去了,我会注意的……’<到时候别怪我啊!唔……>
                          又回到现实世界。我睁开右眼,拿起闹钟。7点。算了,反正也清醒了,干脆起来吧。
                          早饭过后,我在练习室里,跟着大家一起写着谱子。
                          “这段钢琴曲配乐,如何?”初音拿着笔,指着开头部分。
                          “诶?反而觉得用合唱的更好点?”我则提出相反的意见。
                          “那问下巡音姐吧,貌似她很有高见啊~!”初音猛的蹦起来,一脸灿烂的说。
                          “啊,好……嗯?巡音竟然不在啊,我出去找找她吧。”她环顾四周,没发现巡音的踪迹,便起身准备出去。
                          To what color am I dyed?
                          The size of the dyed thing changes
                          because of the difference of the dyed color.
                          I can grow up if it dyes to good people color.
                          I want to dye me to such a color.
                          To what color am I dyed?
                          “恩?”我途径大门的时候,正看见巡音背对着我,在风中唱着。原来在那里啊……我笑笑,便轻轻的走了过去。
                          The color to be dyed changes
                          under the influence of the private life.
                          I degenerate if it dyes to villain color.
                          The color for which I hope is a color with high brightness.
                          I want to become beautiful mind.
                          I want to become it.
                          I want to become beautiful mind.
                          I want to become it.
                          I obtain the conscience.
                          And, becomes a luminous color.
                          There are a lot of black and white in the private life.
                          My color shines by "Affection" and "Esteem" and "Kindness"
                          and "Looking after" and "Nursing" and "Protection"
                          and "Consideration" and "Respect" and "Solicitude"
                          and "Encouragement" and "Friendship", etc.
                          I want to choose color that is brighter than the dark color.
                          If the surrounding is a dark color, I look large.
                          If the surrounding is a luminous color,
                          my existence might be thin.
                          The luminous color improves the environment.
                          The luminous color shines on the dark.
                          However, the luminous color shines only in a dark place.
                          Still, I do not care.(A dark color absorbs the luminous color.)
                          My existence disappears if it winks out.
                          I can become energetic by shining on surroundings.
                          When I become tired and do not shine.
                          The source of "Vigour" can be gotten from "Good man color".
                          The color for which other people hope to me.
                          It is different from the color for which I hope.
                          However, if it is an earth friendly color,
                          I like the "Color that other people like".
                          A dark color in the interior of the spirit is also as the case may be necessary.
                          Both necessary dark colors and bright colors.
                          I want to dye me moderately.
                          It is possible to change greatly in
                          "Thing that becomes a luminous color from a dark color"
                          even if my existence is small.
                          Now will grow in the future even if it is small.
                          いつだって私は今よりもっと求めていたい...
                          例え“ ”がわたしの最高の“个性色”だとしても???
                          To what color am I dyed?
                          The size of the dyed thing changes
                          because of the difference of the dyed color.
                          I can grow up if it dyes to good people color.
                          I want to dye me to such a color.
                          To what color am I dyed?
                          The color to be dyed changes
                          under the influence of the private life.
                          I degenerate if it dyes to villain color.
                          The color for which I hope is a color with high brightness.
                          “啊,巡音,你在这里。”我等待她唱完后,说。
                          但是
                          巡音却机械的转过头来,面无表情。嗯?奇怪,怎么不像以前的巡音呢……?

                          那……那是什么……?头好晕……是……血吗?怎么会……
                          我僵硬的低下头,巡音的手变成了一把尖刀,刺进我的腹部。
                          额啊……我……
                          我顿时浑身无力,倒了下去……
                          巡音……你……
                          在模糊中,我看到的最后一眼是巡音的笑。


                          IP属地:加拿大228楼2011-10-28 16:58
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                            表示后面马上有一炮灰……你懂的……【尽管真的不想让TA当炮灰的……】


                            IP属地:加拿大229楼2011-10-29 02:42
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                              第九章(上)
                              “唔啊……好痛……”
                              没过多久,我跌跌撞撞的爬了起来。看着腹部凝固的血,我眼中的血色闪了闪。
                              “唔啊……可恶,巡音怎么会……”我靠在墙边坐了下来,独自叹息着。
                              <啊啊,果然啊!你果然受伤了!>‘乌鸦嘴啊!’我回了一句,心情却异常的恼怒。
                              ‘巡音为什么干这种事……?’<依我看,那不是巡音。>
                              什么?
                              ‘为,为什么这么讲?’<你想,巡音首先没有那种武器吧?再则,巡音的动作从来没这么僵硬过。>‘是,是么?’我微皱下眉,便又靠再墙上休息。
                              等下。
                              既然不是巡音,那么她来我们公司……
                              我猛的跳起来,往大门看去——
                              是触目惊心的血迹。
                              “不好!”我拿出黑葱,冲进公司,直奔三楼。
                              拜托了!一定不要出什么事情啊!初音还有大家!
                              ……(未完待续)


                              IP属地:加拿大230楼2011-10-31 15:38
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