甜妹纸好

-go outing是对的。
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     Hello teachers!Today,I'll talk about my favourite season.
     I like autumn best. Because it's cool and usually sunny.
people like to go to farms, we can also go out, fly kites and have
picnic.This is very interesting!
     Autumn is the harvest season,in autumn, many trees turn yellow.
It looks very beautiful, I love this golden season very much!
     That's all.
再求捉虫

-【That is wery interesting】This改为That结尾不要单单是That’all.
再加几句敬语与第一段呼应一下
go hiking吧。。。去郊游【不过go outing貌似也是去郊游啊】

植物不是用turn么。三训上是这样的。。

昂。糊涂了。。

turn 是 事物 主动发生的改变。 eg. the food turns bad。
get 是 人为 使发生的改变。 eg. get your answer correct 。
是turn吧

长见识了0 0

结尾不知道加什么【啊~~明天就要演讲了。今天连改都没改好更不要说背了T T