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急求一篇关于“树”作文、急求

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最好是用树来借物喻人的,不是也行,关于“树”的就行、要好的,
各位亲,帮帮忙把,急求!!!!1


1楼2011-03-10 19:43回复
          《白杨》(我只是帮帮你开头结尾,正文自己写!)
           只要想起边疆,就能想到沙漠,在这个寸草不生的地方,空气是那么的浑浊,水源是那么的缺少。(xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx)但是,就是在这个地方,长出了一片绿色,即使在沙漠中似乎毫不起眼,即使绿的是那么可怜,可是它依旧挺起了腰板,像是在沙漠中的卫士,它就是白杨。(最好扯长点。用点形容词捏)
    (xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx)这里讲白杨的优点,以及他就像那些建设边疆的,为了祖国而付出青春的人。这下就是接物喻人了!
           白杨,在最需要它的地方出现了,为荒凉的沙漠增添了美丽,迎着风沙,迎着酷暑,在茫茫的沙漠中茁壮的成长…………………………(也扯长点)
           


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