Once in a while I will re-watch DH and I've just finished watching Season 5. Eddie's death did make me feel sick about the story writer since her death is too dramatic and in the favor of her revenging husband. However, I must give credits to the story writers at the same time since they try to give us the true color of Eddie by telling the stories between her and the other housewives. It's the stories about how Eddie cheered up the 'cancer bitch' Lynette, and how she taught Bree a lesson on how to respect others especially one's own husband, and how she discovered Karl's adultery with his secretary and revealed it to the 'kept-in-the-dark' Susan, and how she predicted herself to die in her youth, or how she revealed her little secret to Mrs. McCluskey about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her (for giving up the custody of the Son to the Father). I think Eddie may not be the "good person" in the society's prototype, but deep down, she's really a "Sexy", "Perceptive", "Strong", "Beautiful", and "One of a kind" person as the other housewives complimented her before Eddie's ashes being spread on Wisteria Lane.
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[Once in a while I will re-watch DH]
Once in a while I re-watch DH
[since her death is too dramatic]
since her death was too dramatic
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
[be the "good person" in the society's prototype]
be the "good person" in society in terms of being a role model
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
[being spread on Wisteria Lane.]
being spread at Wisteria Lane.
I often see u speaking in English so I think you are really ethusiastic of learning it well.
Here are some mistakes which I just found and I hope my corrections are helpful to u.
Once in a while I re-watch DH
[since her death is too dramatic]
since her death was too dramatic
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
[be the "good person" in the society's prototype]
be the "good person" in society in terms of being a role model
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
[being spread on Wisteria Lane.]
being spread at Wisteria Lane.
I often see u speaking in English so I think you are really ethusiastic of learning it well.
Here are some mistakes which I just found and I hope my corrections are helpful to u.
回复：3楼
Thanks for your comments! First of all, my 'enthusiasm' for English as you mentioned is only because that I don't have Chinese input software installed in my laptop; secondly, don't you think you are a little bit too caring about my grammatical error since I only wrote this comment to express my feeling at THAT moment instead of turning it in for a grade; lastly,
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
-> 'There were the stories about'.... since I am talking about more than one story here;
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
->My original sentence came from Eddie's own words, "I love him enough to let him hate me." So you can't blame me to follow the original, right?
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
->'as' here is a conjunctional word meaning 'when', so I think my original sentence makes more sense.
I can see you are a bit pissed off because of my 'enthusiasm' for English(and I hope I am wrong). Like I said earlier, I appreciate your comments but I am only to express my feeling here.
Thanks for your comments! First of all, my 'enthusiasm' for English as you mentioned is only because that I don't have Chinese input software installed in my laptop; secondly, don't you think you are a little bit too caring about my grammatical error since I only wrote this comment to express my feeling at THAT moment instead of turning it in for a grade; lastly,
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
-> 'There were the stories about'.... since I am talking about more than one story here;
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
->My original sentence came from Eddie's own words, "I love him enough to let him hate me." So you can't blame me to follow the original, right?
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
->'as' here is a conjunctional word meaning 'when', so I think my original sentence makes more sense.
I can see you are a bit pissed off because of my 'enthusiasm' for English(and I hope I am wrong). Like I said earlier, I appreciate your comments but I am only to express my feeling here.
回复：5楼
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
-> 'There were the stories about'.... since I am talking about more than one story here;
You either can [there were stories] or [it's the story]
but I think the latter is more appropriate because you are to tell the specific events.
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
->My original sentence came from Eddie's own words, "I love him enough to let him hate me." So you can't blame me to follow the original, right?
Forget about this one. The original is not wrong but oral.
What I wrote is kind of more formal.
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
->'as' here is a conjunctional word meaning 'when', so I think my original sentence makes more sense.
but in my opinion, complimenting seems to be the one because your sentence after is "before Eddie's ashes being spread on Wisteria Lane"
I'n not trying to be judgemental but communicating. There were some people asking about using English before which they knew from the show plus my 1st language is English, so I kind of have the instinct to fix inappropriateness when I see these.
I don't know why you would think that way, but you totally overestimated yourself that I would be having any feelings about you just because your enthusiasm for English. If what I've said bothers u, there goes my apology but you really not the one who you think I think you are.
[It's the stories about ]
It's the story about
-> 'There were the stories about'.... since I am talking about more than one story here;
You either can [there were stories] or [it's the story]
but I think the latter is more appropriate because you are to tell the specific events.
[about herself loving her son(Travers) enough to let him hate her]
about how much she loved her son so that she would let him hate her.
->My original sentence came from Eddie's own words, "I love him enough to let him hate me." So you can't blame me to follow the original, right?
Forget about this one. The original is not wrong but oral.
What I wrote is kind of more formal.
[as the other housewives complimented her ]
as the other housewives complimenting her
->'as' here is a conjunctional word meaning 'when', so I think my original sentence makes more sense.
but in my opinion, complimenting seems to be the one because your sentence after is "before Eddie's ashes being spread on Wisteria Lane"
I'n not trying to be judgemental but communicating. There were some people asking about using English before which they knew from the show plus my 1st language is English, so I kind of have the instinct to fix inappropriateness when I see these.
I don't know why you would think that way, but you totally overestimated yourself that I would be having any feelings about you just because your enthusiasm for English. If what I've said bothers u, there goes my apology but you really not the one who you think I think you are.
